NightHowlers0

I am making my own TBATE fanfiction where my OC has the power of anime and games on his side

NightHowlers0

@stoneclauss just finished correcting all the spelling mistakes I could find. Thank you for your criticism.
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stoneclauss

@NightHowlers0 I have to say its a good start, my only criticism is to read back for spelling mistakes, or when you've put in unnecessary words that make a sentence not make sense. Also, when a word begins with a vowel (a e I o u) it would be an. So an irregular. An unusual event etc 
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NightHowlers0

@stoneclauss The prologue is out
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SpaghettiSnake1

So I did research on the whole magic system of TBATE and I get a better understanding of it now. Deviants are basically advanced used of the 4 elements. Like earth being able to be gravity if the mage is strong enough. 
          
          Do you think I should make a whole different type of magic or stick to the classic 4? I'm really torn if it'll annoy people if I make a whole new type of magic that the MC can use or if I should stick to the 4 elements and it's deviants (even tho art basically already does that with augmentation)

SpaghettiSnake1

@stoneclauss I decided to think of a better path last second. I kept thinking "what if he was arts younger brother" But then I forgot he can also be an older brother. As an older brother, the rivalry Art will have against Lucas will be more...matching? Since Lucas also has an older brother that will try snd stop art. It's also ironic since his Lucas is a conjurer and his older brother is an augmenter while the roles are reversed for Art and Ash
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stoneclauss

@SpaghettiSnake1 good chapter so far. What happened with being an elf?
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NotREALu

How often do you post? 

stoneclauss

@Dark_Descendant over here in england they arent but we do have to wear masks full time. It's especially crucial for my year to come in due to being close to a very important exam period
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Erebus_512

@stoneclauss Shouldn't Schools be closed down now due to covid?
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