
lyttlejoe
@stuck_in_the__clouds Hi, I'd like to say thanks for your reading and voting on Charlie Croft, I hope it was worth your while.

lyttlejoe
@stuck_in_the__clouds I am genuinely grateful for your generous critique. Thank you! Thank you!
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stuck_in_the__clouds
@lyttlejoe It was beautifully written! So realistic and driven with emotion. I’m also glad that you left the ending open because I want to think she didn’t take him back after all he put her through. I love, love, love how you wrote Angel’s part and showed just how torn she was. I hurt for her. I wanted to hug her and tell her how strong she is! ❤️ I’m glad Charlie changed but to think I was rooting for him at first only to see the bigger picture is what really stole my interest. Congratulations on completing the story!
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