Vaishnavisingh11

Please update Tara author ji...
          
          Radhe radhe ~•| 

Vaishnavisingh11

@summerymango  ji ji zarur hehe...hame apki kahaniyan bhot pasand hain ji ..mtlb bhai kya storyline hai apki hehe...
            Or shukriya reply karne ke lie
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summerymango

@Vaishnavisingh11  Radhe Radhe behen ji. 
            
            Work is on progress, jaldi hi update karengi... Bas eshiyai apan payaar barsate raheyega. 
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sublimeblue

laxmi_6714

Please update author chapter 12.cant wait for it . Just loving your book ❤️❤️❤️

laxmi_6714

@laxmi_6714 done gotcha. Can't open it from notifications but can open when going to your account and then going on the book  
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elodiezielle

Hey I completed all the given chapters of your book and I truly liked your storyline yar. Kinna kamaal ka storyline liya hai aapne, I'm genuinely impressed. I truly like those books which are written to give some lessons or at least one! This story truly unfolds the true condition of women in India. The way her saas treats her, the way her husband does. Tara's love for Manik truly tells us about how a woman's heart is. She's truly something created by God to give comfort. The Mamta shown in her heart for that kid is very beautiful. Idk if Prithvi will change or not. I mean it's good that he's caring but inna horny h vo.. mera to sir fodne ka man karta h uska lol! But I see it's a story. Still so nicely written. Once again the storyline is amazing. Your way of writing is neat. Just don't use extra fonts. Use only what's given. When you write in language other than English, write that dialogue in italics (that's how we do it). And ofc, give translation in brackets just like you're giving. Other than that, everything is perfect. Keep sharing your work. Bohot acha likha hai, bro :) 

summerymango

@elodiezielle
            
             Thanks for your lovely review. I hope you will read the upcoming chapters too. And yes, thank you so much for taking the time to read my book. It means a lot to me❤
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