swtty_writzz

Go and check out the new chapter, shower with lots of love. ^.^

swtty_writzz

@SwixxxWix tnxx sweett ಥ⁠‿⁠ಥ
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SwixxxWix

@swtty_writzz the chapter was amazing *_* 
          	  
          	  
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swtty_writzz

I'm thinking of unpublishing the book because my characters really sucks fs...

swtty_writzz

@swtty_writzz decision changes now and I'm not deleting my book ^.^ 
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kritianuhsk

@swtty_writzz why you wanna do that cutie your character are just perfect and just don't believe in some who said bad about them...
            You have taken a long time and did so much of hardwork while writing this book so why you wanna delete it..
            The book is perfect charcter are perfect every thing is to good please don't delete the book cutie..
            Logo ka bolna sa kuch nhi hota ya tumari book ha tumara charcter ha just don't listen to the people ^⁠_⁠^
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swtty_writzz

Yoo, so I've been noticing some things about my book and a particular character. Ofcourse it's our Rudra Singh Rathore you all'. Many of the reader said that in the initial chapters he was acting good with her and then in the middle bad. It's absolutely true and thanks for them to notice the smallest details of my book but I just wanna tell you that the initial chapters are edited..
          
          First the trope was "she fell first and he fell harder" but then i changed it to "both fell first and harder" I've edited some chapters and the chapters which aren't then obviously he's not in love with her in those. It's my fault of not editing but just to explain you and inform you that once the story ends, I'm gonna edit it and make it perfect.
          
          (Will update in two days)
          
          Thnx,
          Gn,
          Swtty.

swtty_writzz

I'm thinking of ending the story with their happy ending without continuing her pregnancy. What do you think? Should I send the story in the one chapter or should I write further about her pregnancy?? Lemme know soon...

swtty_writzz

@swtty_writzz okay so my final decision is I'll write more 2-3 chapters....thanks for the response sweetiess.
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SwixxxWix

@swtty_writzz I feel you should write about Their pregnancy, how rudra will take care of her during her pregnancy and some cute little moments with their baby , atleast 3 chapters more . It's even okay if you end the story after knowing about pregnancy, it's entirely up to you ,, we are happy with anything . 
            ❤️ 
            ^_^
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kritianuhsk

@swtty_writzz I think you should write atleast 2-3 chapter 1 chapter for her pregnancy and other for there cute little moments with there baby or otherwise its totally up to you how should you end this but maybe it will be so good to see them as mom and dad..:⁠-⁠)
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swtty_writzz

As being a new author, I'll just let you point out at my each and every mistake. If you're my reader then feel free to share your opinion on my Instagram. I too need to know that what my readers are expecting from me. You don't need to feel like "what will she thinks?" "What if I'm being rude?" Please don't hesitate to slap my mistakes so I won't repeat them again in my nest book.
          
          

swtty_writzz

Hey bubbles, just was scrolling through all the comments and then came across a reader's one who thought my book isn't high in expections as I told it would be. No offence and hate towards her cuz she just shared her opinion but now I'll share mine. As a reader you'll need to understand that it takes time to build up a writing habit and that skill. 
          
          I'm a very new writer with no support so ofc I'm still learning to improve my writing and narrating skills but about my charactersz I was crystal clear that they both fell at the same time. You'll think Rudra as a jerk in the initial or until middle part of the book but once you get to know that he was a victim too then I hope your thoughts won't be the same.
          
          I'm really sorry if my story isn't good as much you thought it would be but please understand me, I'm trying my best to improve. I won't let this story end just like this, I'll re-edit it until I feel like that's a perfect story for readers. And to all the readers who are still supporting me with the spelling errors, lack of character development....I love you guyss. Seriously.
          
          I hope I made myself clear enough now.
          
          Swtty.

kritianuhsk

@swtty_writzz your story is just Great just don't listen to people like this they themself can't do anything and only do hate comments just don't listen to them and continue your bookkk.
            It just magic and amazing..
            And I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter ^⁠_⁠^
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swtty_writzz

I'm changing the book cover and i apologise for that cuz many of you loved the previous one but we should change some things time to time. Lemme know if you like the new one.