momlove1234

Hey I just wanted to check up on you and see how you are doing and happy Mother's Day I hope you have a wonderful day with your mother and I Renton a new chapter if you want to check it out it's up to you and we should really talk more often if you're not too busy of course like get to know each other and I hope someday my story will end up being a movie or something the third or fourth movie of my favorite childhood anyway don't worry I'm trying my best to think of ideas for the story and when I'm completely done with the story I'm planning on maybe someday or some way I could Post-it into a real book for everybody to read but I don't see that ever happening because no one will want to read it anyway but my mom always told me you never know even though I'm not the best writer but I'm still trying to figure out the plot of the story hopefully it will all work out in the end anyway talk to you later stay true to our lord Jesus no matter what and always be yourself ❤️️

teroTauko1234

@momlove1234 Hello! Brittney, thanks for your concern. Acutually I am from Nepal and here we celebrate Mother's Day in a different day. Thank you anyway and I wish your Mother's Day was wonderful. Ya, we should talk more often and get to know each other. By the way, my name is Pramod Limbu and like I said I am from Nepal and a follower Jesus Christ. I will be reading your story and I have seen that you have good imagination which is what makes a good story. And I believe in your dream that one day you will be a successful writer. If you don't mind I would like to know more about yourself.
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momlove1234

And I fixed up chapter 22 so you can go back and read it if you want and for now on I'll listen to your ideas for what to put in the story as well let me know what you think of that chapter thank you

teroTauko1234

@momlove1234 Thanks again for fixing the chapter and I've read it and found it to be good. For the next chapter I think you can bring the villians for little thrill. May be there will be some fight and every thing seems to be against Charlie so that you can end the chapter with suspense leaving the readers with curiosity regarding what might happen next. At least that's my idea and you should always bring your own imagination and creativity because it's your story.
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momlove1234

Does that look better with that chapter instead of the other one sorry for making you uncomfortable you were right we should remain holy and I still need your help with meal ideas for the chapter so I don't go down that route again plus I should think about making that story kid friendly for All Families to enjoy what did you think of the other chapter well the beginning part where Charlie and Sasha adopted Anne Marie what did you think of that part

teroTauko1234

@momlove1234 I am very glad you chose to remove inapproriate parts of the story and replaced with good one. Ya you should continue making the story for kids and family and I liked that part where Annie gets adopted by Charlie and Sasha. You have good imagination and I like the way you write about details. I can see that your writing skill is improving. I want to encourage you to focus on your spellings, full stops, grammer...you know so that people will be willing to read more. Anyway you are doing good.
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momlove1234

Hello thank you for following me I'm sure you'll make a wonderful stories to and I really want to get to know you and what inspire you too want to make a story or join this website and what's your interest for the future if you do write a story I'm sure you'll do amazing at it and we can be friends if you want too

momlove1234

@momlove1234 thank you so much and you're right I should not let others get to me no matter what and what matters is I'm doing this for fun and you are right it is a bad idea to post a story book to a store besides people will not want to read it anyway so it's best to stick to what I got right now and focus on my writing and practice a little more and like you said in the future it will become even better and who knows maybe one day they will make all dogs Go To Heaven free or fourth movie in the future you'll never know right and thank you for the encouragement I really appreciate it and You and Your Friends Are free to post new ideas for the story I really appreciate it ❤️
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teroTauko1234

@momlove1234 Well, don't be discouraged. You know you have problem with spellings and grammer. But like any other skills you can learn to be better at your writing skills. You can use dictionary apps, online tutorials and make habit of reading more and more stories so that your writing skill will be improved. It might take some months or even some years but you will get better at it every day. Right now, I don't think it's good idea to put it in a store but if you want to then you can do that. However, remember that you can be a good writer, even the best one. Keep going. Don't give up. Follow your dreams. I believe in you.☺☺☺
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momlove1234

@momlove1234 @momlove1234 when I'm done with the story and playing 2 put it in a store but no one will probably not buy it besides who would be interested in buying the story I'm not the best writer anyway who well buy my book in a store if I'm not the best writer do you know ️❤️
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