thatGeminikid1

Looking for a new story to read any suggestions?

thatGeminikid1

thatGeminikid1

@Mahlyf_Mahrulz I don't mind the criticism especially when they are correct. I'll do better next time. Thank you for reading and pointing this out
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Mahlyf_Mahrulz

@thatGeminikid1 also, maybe you can put the dialogues in double quotes instead of italics, because usually people assume italics to be a person's thoughts...
            
            You're okay with constructive criticism, right? I really don't mean to offend you...
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