thelolp777

So.... I'm kinda stuck rn and I need to make an outlet other than my ff and the villainess one. And I've been reading GOT ff recently and thought to myself "You know what? I want to write storm light with this one." What do you think? Should I finish at least one work first before moving on to other projects or add new ones? 

nike01x2

@thelolp777 I understand that feeling but I think you should focus on one project first and leave others as a draft. That way, at least the reader can know the ending of a story rather than being stuck in time. Being a reader in Wattpad is painful because all the unfinished masterpieces out there that will never reach their conclusion so I at least want one of my favourite books to reach its end. (I just want to see Emma/Lucy reach her either happy, bittersweet or sad ending. Idc but preferably happy) but at the end of the day, I have no power to force you and I just want to say that there are readers who will wait for you to update no matter how long it is. (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡
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thelolp777

So.... I'm kinda stuck rn and I need to make an outlet other than my ff and the villainess one. And I've been reading GOT ff recently and thought to myself "You know what? I want to write storm light with this one." What do you think? Should I finish at least one work first before moving on to other projects or add new ones? 

nike01x2

@thelolp777 I understand that feeling but I think you should focus on one project first and leave others as a draft. That way, at least the reader can know the ending of a story rather than being stuck in time. Being a reader in Wattpad is painful because all the unfinished masterpieces out there that will never reach their conclusion so I at least want one of my favourite books to reach its end. (I just want to see Emma/Lucy reach her either happy, bittersweet or sad ending. Idc but preferably happy) but at the end of the day, I have no power to force you and I just want to say that there are readers who will wait for you to update no matter how long it is. (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡
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thelolp777

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Sorry guys updates will have to wait. My French class decides to fuck me royally today. Can't say the names for confidiality reason but man... Im so fucking infuriated rn. For the record I don't hate hate French per say, just their pronunciation. After all one of the few supporters I had from the start were French (I assume they are but I could be wrong. If I am, my apologies). Have nothing but gratitude for their continued support but man... French words are so hard to pronounce and this class isn't making it easier to learn. 

D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 It could be a hard-headed ogryn that is more intelligent than the other ogryns since it can count up to 10 and say its full name. It could be the best friend and backguard of the character you want to play. Bone'eads are often the brains of their units, and other Ogryns look to them for leadership both on and off the battlefield. For other Ogryns, the fact that a Bone'ead even has their rank is usually reason enough to obey, and most are content to trust that anyone who remembers as much as a Bone'ead probably knows more anyway.
            bone head:
            "So I wonder what Colonel Stracker would do? Don't worry, I say, he'd probably yell at me for standing around and not smashing things with my teammates. So that's what I did. They even gave me this shiny medal when I was done."
            NIFT SPECIALIST, FIRST CLASS BONE'EAD, SPEAKS CANDULLY ABOUT HIS PROMOTION.
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thelolp777

@D4RKS0ul225946870 I can but it will have to wait. There are some characters I wanted to put in first so I'm not sure where I'll put the abhumans tbh
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D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 One question when you do ground combat, can you add a squad of ogryns? I would like more humans to be added for the reason that it is something new for Halo and I would like their reaction besides the fact that ratlings and ogryns are the most common in the empire.
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CharlesCedrickMDiaz

You still there dude you ok [:

CharlesCedrickMDiaz

@CharlesCedrickMDiaz cool just checking, hope you have a NC day. (;
            
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thelolp777

@CharlesCedrickMDiaz I'm still here my good man. I'm just stuck to this stupid stump and can't seemed to write what I want. No worries, it may take me a year to update but by the throne I will not abandon anything, you have my word. 
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Silverlylie

Do you will post more often on royalroad ? 

thelolp777

@LouisLason I will but it is slower tbh because I have to edit my old chapters with my improved writing skills. What you read here is my old skill 2 yrs prior (except the 30's, the 30s are fairly recent) so updating my old ones will take time 
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Silverlylie

@ LouisLason   for have the same levels of chapters on silent heir please 
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thelolp777

Happy new year everyone hope this year would be better than the last. Updates will be slow atm as I'm reading book to learn how others writes theirs. Hopefully the updates would ce sooner than later. 

thelolp777

@XavierGulley no worries. My style in writing would change but it would never adapt beyond recognition, 3rd person ftw, though I hope it does improve my basics. Grammar is surprisingly a bitch to deal with. Also Ive been keeping tabs with that story, it's kinda basic op isekai theme (though in this case it is a littleral country) but I love it nonetheless. 
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XavierGulley

@thelolp777 as long as you don't pick up their grammar habits I don't care keep up the good work also "Summoning America" is also a pretty good onging story I believe it has 200 chapters
            Can't wait for the next updates
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thelolp777

Hey I'm still alive. Just dealing with finals for the first semester. Don't plan on dropping any of the stories I made. Just got writers block and school and all. Apologies for the silence these couple of months. No worries, I've not forgotten. 

D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 I am still hoping for luck in the exams to have faith in the emperor to pass and for me to pass the administrative procedural law course I must present the next two weeks :v
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thelolp777

So... was about to break a leg and write since I had an entire week off and post at least one chapter for both novel and my ff... turns out, my MS word had ran out... yeah... didn't know these guys are a subscription service thought it was free since I've been doing it for the last 3 years. Needless to say, I am boned. 
          
          Currently trying to find alternatives such as campfire but adjusting to it is extremely hard especially when dark mode is nowhere to be found. Really bummed out since I had so many free time and  things to write down. Now I could just suck it up and pay for the service but I'm still a student. 
          
          I don't earn money from this and asking my parents is a no go sooooo yeah... delay upon delay would be expected. Sorry guys, but learning how to use campfire would be my alternative and it will take a while. 

thelolp777

@D4RKS0ul225946870
            
            7 bucks a month
            70 a year
            And 80 for a lifetime I believe
            
            I'm ngl 7 dollars a month might not seem big at first but that quickly adds up and considering I earn nothing from this, it will quickly kill my savings so it's entirely not good
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D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 How much does it cost?
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thelolp777

Today is my bday so rest assured that I'm writing an update as of now. College still won't give me time but hey its my bday I will write whether they like it or not. (pacific time btw, last day of September rocks woohoo) 

thelolp777

@D4RKS0ul225946870 ya pasó pero bueno gracias! No te preocupes, todo a su debido tiempo lo sabrás... todo a su debido tiempo
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D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 feliz cumpleaños my king con cara de Kong espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo espero saber también que dios fue el que descendió pero eso puede que falta después de la batalla en el espacio y terrestre.
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thelolp777

@Bored-as-helll67 no worries and thanks! 
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thelolp777

So I've decided to enter my og novel (the silent heir) for watty's 2023. Dunno how well it will go but hey, a missed shot is still better than not taking a shot at all

Peace_Painter707

@thelolp777 Definitely! Go for it~☆
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thelolp777

@Peace_Painter707
            Oh wow i didn't exactly expect this but thank you for the support! Though I do not know what my chances are, it sure is better than nothing. 
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Peace_Painter707

@thelolp777 Absolutely! ☆ Wishing you the best of luck on your journey. Whether you win or not, I hope you'll come out of this experience as a better author and continue your writing with determination. ❤
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thelolp777

I seem to realize why I'm struggling to write. It's because I lost my drive, my motivation in writing these beauties. Man I hope that is what I'm missing so I can begin writing again. Because if so the answer is simple! It is so simple and it's in front of me this whole time! I want to make people cry. Ight I don't mean it in a bad way but more of a... writing way. 
          
          I want to deliver you guys a "Damn it author! Just give them a happy ending already! They deserve it!" type of reaction rather than a "This character sucks!" You don't really love a character unless you connect with them. Seeing their struggles is one thing, seeing them suffer makes you hate me but hopefully sympathize and love the characters more. With that in mind, I'm going to start writing again the saddest chapters yet and edit later chapters.
          
          I'm planning to also add chapters in between existing once. I want to apologize in advance because I really need to flesh out some of my side characters later. Iva for example seemed not that all likeable and well recieved by you guys. I know I can make her disagreeable but understandable at the same time and maybe even make some of you feel sympathetic for her reason why she thinks that way. I just need to flesh her out.
          
          To make it less confusing, chapters that I'll add in between existing ones in the future had the designation .1 (ie: 17.1 17.2 17.3) I hope if you have the time you can point out errors in my work such as grammar or a particular scene where it simple bores you out. Maybe I can tweak it to make it more enjoyable. Seriously guys every valid critism would help me improve alot. 
          
          I need to know if this part bores you or this part is too confusing or this part feels repeated and the impact is less, well, impactful and etc. If you have the time, I would highly appreciate it. 

thelolp777

@D4RKS0ul225946870 
            
            Tbh, no me sorprende teniendo en cuenta que hay un anime honesto con Dios sobre un perro y los HUMANOS quieren ensuciarlo. También eso es algo de dedicación justo ahí para leer. Nuevamente, me siento muy honrado tbh. Además, tengo la mala costumbre de escribir sin hacer el más mínimo esfuerzo por compartirlo porque 1 está sin terminar y creo que la gente pensaría una mierda por ello y 2 soy bastante tímido al respecto. Aún así, siempre me alegro cuando la gente lo descubre. Es como si algunas personas encontraran el cofre del tesoro, pero en lugar de ser yo quien lo encuentra, soy yo quien lo entierra. Lamentablemente, odio ser el portador de malas noticias, pero ese fanfic realmente tendría que esperar. Como mucho tiempo. No estoy atascado en escribirlo persay (literalmente tengo 5 capítulos esperando a ser escritos) pero estoy atascado en escribir mis novelas originales. Hasta que pueda escribir capítulos satisfactorios para esos dos, no lo actualizaré pronto. Y estoy en una mala racha... y mi verano termina en 3 semanas... sí, es bastante malo ngl.
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D4RKS0ul225946870

@thelolp777 el clásico Google traductor inglés a español que está en el celular que lo traduce automáticamente a veces el Wattpad  no lo permite que lo traduzca y tenga que reiniciar la página de nuevo para poder leer tu fanfic lo que me molesta es que muy poca gente entre a leer tu fanfic después veo el fanfic sobre un romance entre un cepillo de dientes y tú, ya no entiendo a la gente ._.
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thelolp777

@D4RKS0ul225946870 
            tambien como lo traduces Por lo que yo sabía, wattpad no permite copiar y pegar, lo que hace que traducirlo sea extremadamente molesto.
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