onadeel
This is your first story, but it's unbelievable, it's really great. I'm a big fan of Sahyu's stories, and they are my favorite and only ship. I hope you write more stories about them.
If you need more ideas, let me know. I have plenty, but I'm not as good at crafting stories and sequencing events as you do.
Keep doing what you're doing, I support you.
