tricolour

Hey guys, I know I've been gone for a while but I just logged on to 400 notifications and it makes me so so happy that you're all still reading my stuff<3

cocobdan

Hi! I just finished reading Oreo and wanted to tell you that I really liked it. It is a good idea, and the book has much potential. One can feel that it is a young writer (new to the field) who has completed it, but it shows your talent.
          You could probably improve it a lot by coming back to it to polish the plot. And well, it can go in so many directions that I cannot tell you how it would be best. That is only your choice to take!
          
          Though one thing you should definitely correct right now: at the end, it is WW2, not 1!!! :D
          
          Continue polishing your talent (if you want :P), you will do great things!
          Cheers!
          coco