Bri

Hi I'm working on a story right now and if anyone is interested in reading it, it's called Bride of Shadows and I'll probably change the name sooner or later, but I don't know what to change it to. (you can ask me questions about it if you want to know more). I'll publish the first two chapters I've been working on if anyone wants to read it so I can get some constructive criticism and advice since I'm not sure where I'm going with it or what I want to quite happen yet and I'd appreciate if someone would help me out :)

Random quotes because I feel like it
          Show me a hero and I'll write you a tragedy
          -F. Scott Fitzgerald
          Not all who wander are lost
          -Unknown
          Tis my true form is something odd, but blaming me is blaming God. Could I create myself anew, I would not fail in pleasing you. If I could reach from pole to pole or grasp the ocean with a span, I would be measured by the soul; the mind's standard of a man.
          -Joseph Merrick
          Find the place inside where there's joy, and the joy will burn out the pain.
          -Joseph Campbell 
          Although the world is full of suffering, it's full of overcoming it.
          -Helen Keller
          Hope is the thing with feathers, that perches in the soul, and sings the tune without the words, and never stops at all.
          -Emily Dickinson
          Love is giving someone the ability to destroy you, but trusting them not to.
          -Unknown
          Try again. Fail again. Fail better.
          -Samuel Beckett
          Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside of us. And sometimes, they win.
          -Stephen King
          All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.
          -Edgar Allen Poe
          Walking with a friend in the dark is better than walking alone in the light.
          -Helen Keller
          I know what it's like to be afraid of your own mind.
          -Spencer Reid
          Scars show us where we have been. They do not dictate where we are going.
          -David Rossi
          Well done Frank Zhang. That is exactly how people beat Chinese handcuffs. They turn into iguanas.
          -Leo Valdez
          The more you love, the more you suffer.
          -Calypso 
          If my life is going to mean anything, I have to live it myself.
          -Percy Jackson
          Jason Gideon: Try again. Fail again. Fail better. Spencer Reid: Samuel Beckett. Derek Morgan: Try not. Do or do not. Jason Gideon: Yoda. 
          -Criminal Minds
          You can chain me. You can torture me. You can even destroy this body- but you cannot imprison my mind.
          -Mahatma Gandhi
          You read through all of that? Wow... thanks, this took awhile.

So I started a story. It's called EternalCrest. I'd appreciate if someone read it. :)