@xKingFrogx I think the original ending was better written, but I would've liked to see Setial go back in a cold emotionless rage to cut off the king and his brother's heads. Then either commit suicide or die of old age after a boring life and meet Nikkol again in the afterlife of their religion.
I just read all three of your stories and I can honestly say I enjoyed each and every one of them that I stayed up all night reading them. I can’t wait for the continuation of your stories >w<