Wangxian199

Hi author how are you and your baby . I want to know that when you will update your ff next chapter 

xioaboi

@Wangxian199 hi, we both are fine. Since we just shifted to the new location, still needs to settle a bit. But i will try my best to come up with an update. For now I planned to edit my ff for any grammar or spelling mistake. After that i will continue with new update as well
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EmeraldPhoenix4941

Hey, Author!! Just today, I started reading your story, and I think it's a good one. I don't mean this in an offensive way, but I think that the story will be more enjoyable if there are fewer mistakes in it. I saw your name on your profile, and I think English is not your first language. It's not my first language either, but that shouldn't stop us from improving ourselves, right?? If you're interested, then I would like to point out a few corrections in the story I read until now. Lastly, I am sorry if my message offended you in any way.

xioaboi

@hariharanandini20 thanks for your aid. No offence taken. I'm just glad for the opportunity to improve myself and my story.
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EmeraldPhoenix4941

@xioaboi I'm glad that you accepted my suggestion. I'm a student, so I also might make mistakes, but this is a great opportunity for me to improve myself as well. Since English is not your first language, you made mistakes in both vocabulary and grammar. I regret to inform you that I can not help you with grammar right now as it will take time, and I have exams going on at the moment till 27th December. However, I can help you with vocabulary errors I found until now.
            Some of the spelling mistakes you made and their corrections are :
            
            1) During the Night-hunt of Wei Wuxian and Lan Wangji.
            
            Pray - ❌️
            Pray means to address God.
            
            Prey - ✅️
            Prey means an animal that is caught  or killed ( in this case, corpses, ghosts, monsters, etc.).
            
            
            2) Describing Lan Wangji's character. Cold-
            
            Denominator - ❌️
            The denominator is a mathematical value.
            
            Demeanor - ✅️
            Demeanor means outer behavior.
            
            
            3) Describing Lan Wangji's life. His-
            
            Piers - ❌️
            Pier is a pillars platform projecting into sea or any water body.
            
            Peers - ✅️
            Peer is a person of the same age, status, or ability as the specified person.
            
            
            4) Tiered - ❌️
            Tiered means having rows or levels placed one above the other. 
            
            Tired - ✅️
            Tired means in need of sleep or rest.
            
            
            5) When Wei Ying was in danger.
            
            Thread - ❌️
            Thread is a long, thin strand of cotton, nylon, or other fibres. 
            
            Threat - ✅️
            Threat (in this case) means a possibility of trouble, danger, or ruin.
            
            
            Also, while writing the names of the characters, make sure to write the first letter of the name in capital letters since they are nouns. For example - Wei Wuxian, Wei Ying, Lan Zhan, Lan Wangji, Lan Xichen, Jiang Cheng. 
            
            Also, it's Wen Chao from Qishan Wen Sect.
            
            These are some of the errors I remembered. I will address the rest of the vocabulary and grammar errors after I'm done with my exams.
            
            
            Lastly, I do not mean to offend you with my message. I'm sorry if my message offended you in any way. 
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xioaboi

@hariharanandini20 thanks for your comment. Indeed English is not my first language and I'm more than happy if you can help me to improve myself.
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Wangxian199

Hi author how are you and your daughter. Please update your ff next chapter. 

xioaboi

@DivyaParmar969 we both are fine. Sorry for my delay. I had some exam regarding my job since I resigned my previous job when I'm pregnant. That's why the delay. I will try to update as soon as possible. I missed my flow and having difficulty in getting it back.
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Wangxian199

Hi this chapter confus me . Your last chapter was a vision and your this chapter death and new charcter . What happened after telling xichan , wangji father live his seculgion or not 

Wangxian199

@xioaboi thank you for your reply. I was just confus . 
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xioaboi

@DivyaParmar969 the discussion about the events of vision didn't happened yet. As I mentioned in this chapter, qiren is on business trip. So they waited for him to return. Even Wangji didn't know the full details of vision. Since wuxian is now disturbed with his jie's death, meeting again postponed. It will be included in my next chapter 
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