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Hi hun, here's the review as promised. Hope it gives you clarity. Please ask if you've got questions...
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Y/N, who became a prey to the predator, tries to escape from them. In the race for survival, she meets Kim Taehyung. He swore to protect her. She swore to make her dream possible. They had decided to find their way home with the help of one another
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I notice you recently changed your cover and hun, It was a great change. Taehyung's skin (his perfect glassy Korean skin 😭) in front of the black background, the artistic add ins and big brightly coloured decorative fonts lure the eye, and from your title and what I've gathered in your book so far, I can tell it's suitably appropriate for it. But what I actually like the most, is that one - it's obviously a full edit that someone's put a bit of work into making, and two - it's got a gun and a rose on it. Precision matters people!
The title is a surprisingly common one so I can't give it kudos for being one-of-a-kind, and from where your story is up to right now, it only appears to be partially suited (with the mentions of roses). However, going by the hints you've given about the direction it's headed; I'm picking it will eventually be completely befitting.
