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It's you who'll reach the peak.
~Walt Disney
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>it means to turn to ice
>it also means a disney movie
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It doesn't matter if you win or not, we're all here to learn something so if you see an aspect where your book fumbled, it means you should have a look at that aspect again and try to revamp it.
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Title: 8/10 Cover: 6/10 Blurb: 8/10 Plot: 13/15 Spelling and grammar: 21/25 Originality: 9/10 Character development: 9/10 Personal enjoyment: 9.5/10 Total 83.5/100
The title of the book is good but the cover needs to improve as it does not truly catch my eye and doesn't contemplate a lot in simple words it's kind of plain and can be improved.The blurb of the story is good but I would have enjoyed a bit more information in it which would spark my curiosity so I would want to read book to find out what happened.I love the plot it leaves you hanging in your seats.There are a few misspellings hither and thither but not a lot. I also noticed the author used a French sentence and wanted to write the translation below it but instead again wrote the sentence he/she used so please check it. The writing style that author used was good but at times she used some words which weren't needed exactly. She has a simple vocabulary yet effective but should work a bit more on it and make shorter sentences when u can.Originality of the book was again good. Overall the book is good just needs a few more improvements and it would be even more awesome.
