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Hi! So ayun, binabalak kong gumawa ng isa pang story tho hindi pa tapos 'tong isa HAHAH!

Tatanungin ko lang sana kayo kung ano bang mas prefer niyo. Socmed AU type or yung puro narration? Basahin niyo nalang sa baba kung anong mas bet niyo, comment na din kayo para masaya, choz! Need ko lang talaga ng opinion kasi kahit ako hindi ko din alam gagawin ko.

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Narration type:

I heard my phone rang and when I saw Fluke's name on the screen, I immediately answered the call.

"Hoy! Where na u? Dito na us!" inilayo ko ng kaunti ang phone mula sa tenga ko dahil sa lakas ng boses niya.

"Alak na alak na? Excited much?" I replied while my eyes are still fixed on the road.

"Medj lang naman"

"Sige, wait mo ko ah? Papakainin kita bote ng beer." I jokingly said.

I turned on the speaker before I put down my phone to hear what he says and focus on driving at the same time.

"Hmp! Madapa ka sana pagpasok mo mamaya para grand entrance!" Sabi niya habang tumatawa sa kabilang linya. Makatawa namn 'to, sarap hambalusin.

"Gaga, sumbong kita sa tatay mo gusto mo may lawet din!"

Biglang may tumawid sa kalsada dahilan ng biglaang pagpreno ko at kasabay nito ay ang paghulog ng cellphone ko sa sahig.

I looked at the guy who suddenly crossed the road, he seemed miserable. Sayang, pogi pa naman.

Bababa sana ako ng sasakyan para sermonan si kuya pero bigla kong narinig ang sigaw ni Fluke mula sa kabilang linya.

"Hoy Gun! Hello?! Gun?!"

I was about to pick up the phone and answer Fluke when I heard a strong impact. That's when I realized I stopped at the middle of an intersection.

Deafening silence echoed around the whole place. Tila ba bumagal at unti-unting humihinto ang lahat hanggang sa dumidilim na ang buong paligid.

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SOCMED AU TYPE:

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