Avneil Os "Hamari Adhuri Kahani"

The call

I heard this story some years ago and suddenly came in my mind and thought to write on Avneil so here it is.

Hearttouching Reading ahead.......

Neil and Avni were best friends. They could talk and talk for what seemed like hours, spending all their time on the phone.

And when they were speaking to each other it was like there was nothing wrong in the world, they could never be unhappy or sad in those moments.

One day, Avni texted Neil and he didn’t reply which was most unusual. She tried again but to no avail. Finally, she called him but there was no answer.

An entire day passed and Neil was not available through phone or text. Avni started getting worried that something was definitely wrong.

That night, Avni couldn’t sleep and stayed up all night worrying and crying. It was then she realized just how much Neil actually meant to her.

The next morning however, she received a call. It was Neil! She was so happy and as soon as she picked up the call…

Neil: Hey!

Avni: I’m so glad to hear from you, what happened?

Neil: I… I was… busy.

[The girl knew that something was off but she couldn’t ask.]

[silence]

Neil: You know what, we should stop this. We shouldn’t talk any more.

Avni: [stunned silence] What? Why?

Neil: Sorry. Bye.

[Neil cuts the call. Avni cannot believe it, it’s as if she has lost a part of her.]

All their past conversations started flashing in front of her eyes.
She started crying, tears were streaming down her face.
She was lost and confused.
She felt broken, sad and alone.
She was standing on the roof and wanted to jump.
He was the one for her, why had he done that?
“Why?!” she yelled as loudly as she could from the roof.

Then she decided she was going to try and win him back.

[She dialled his number]

Avni: Hey

Neil: Why did you call me?

Avni: I need to say something.

Neil: Go ahead.

Avni: I wanted to say just one thing…

[Her voice choked. “He doesn’t care about me,” she thought.]

Neil: Say it!

Avni: Are you okay?

[Silence]

The tears were streaming down her face again. She hung up😔, and decided to write a note and ran out of the house with it.

[Six hours passed]

[Phone rings in Neil’s room]

It’s the Avni's mom. She tells him that the Avni got hit by a car when she was on her way to see Neil and now she is admitted in the hospital.

Neil rushed to see her.

He reached and took her name, she opened her eyes.

Neil: Please be okay, I’m so sorry.😭😭 I'm really sorry Avni....mujhe maaf kardo😭😭😭🙏🏻🙏🏻

Avni: Why did you do that?

Neil:🥺😔😓 I have a heart condition and I don’t have many days to live. I didn’t want to hurt you.

Avni closes her eyes, never to wake up again.

Neil could not believe this has happened because of him.

10 minutes later, Neil gets a heart attack and dies from grief.

Tell me how is it🥺?

Thank you for reading 🙏🏻