Hey guys,
So this is a story that I definitely want to publish in the next year. Your help in finding plot holes and other issues within the story would be appreciated. But please don't like whack my story apart and say it sucks. This isn't the final draft, and will be improved upon as time goes on. I will do my best to clean it up and take as many suggestions as possible.
Please do not trash me, my story or each other. I will not trash you either, and if it comes off as mean, I shall try to make it up to you.
Thank you for your time and patience.
All the best!
LoneStarRebel
PS, I don't know if my actual name is on here, but I will let it out sometime in the future (maybe).
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The Portal Effect
Science FictionTraining to become part of the President's guard in an organization that doesn't exist is all Harley and her mates have known. But when her team is sent on a recon mission to find out what caused a large explosion changes what the group, and subsequ...
