Part 49

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// Sorry guys for being so late actually I was thinking I haven't written the story as I expected but I now realized that I can't write more cringe than what DKP is doing. I am seriously hating yrkkh now as DKP has destroyed Kaira and that's the reason I can't write much about Kaira.

//I know I have done many mistakes so creative criticism is accepted (.....

(Unedited)

I know I seriously need to edit this part  


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Naira reach in front of goenka villa all the previous memories were coming in front of her eyes when she come their for first time to the time she left 5 years back a lone tear escape from her eyes. When she was lost in her memories kids were already out of the car.She called them to stop but Kairu were to excited to meet with the family members and to make them meet with her mumma and little brother so she without listening to Naira runs inside house.

Naira called for them "Kairav..princess luk jao papa aayenge hme lene "but they are already inside. The security guards were to shocked to see naira after years.

Kaira and kairav runs inside and sees whole family members present their .

Kairav runs and goes in Kartik's arms calling for his 'papa' followed by Kairu and he shares a hug.

All family members including singhanias were to shocked seeing the scene in front of them .As Kartik called them to make tell them something very important all were present there .Kartik was not getting courage to start the conversation and tell them about naira being alive he was just to weak and embarrassed but he was trying from last half hour. And at the time Kids come inside. Kairav calling him as papa makes family to get shock.

K dadi:- kya hei ye Kittu kon hei ye?

manish:- ha kartik

Kairu :- offo aap sbko itna bhi nhi pta ye mera bhai hei kairav

k:- muje issi bare mein baat krni hein aap sbse, princess aap kairav ko apna room dikhao tb tk

Kairu:- papa phle muje kairav ko sbse introduce to krne do

K(can't say no to her so):- thik hei princess or jaldi

Vansh comes to kaira

Vansh:- di ye sachme aapka bhai hei

Kairu(in low voice):- Ha Mere papa ne btaya that na muje ki mumma mission pr hei aur ye mera bhai

Kairu(to kairav):- aur kairav ye hei vansh chachu (giggling)

Kairav:- chachu ,ye toh mere hi hight ke hei .Ra dhe krishn chachu

vansh:- kya di aap bhi na ,mein chachu nhi tumhara big bro hounga

Kairu:- ha to mere papa ko kyu big bro bolte ho

vansh:- kyuki vo mere big bro hei

Kairu(hitting palm on her head):- fine. Chote ye tera big bro bhi hei

Kairav:- oh chachu bhi ,big bro bhi

Gayu comes to vansh to take him

Kaira:- ha jaise ye (pointing at gayu) meri pyari masi hei mtlab tumhari bhi aur dadi bhi hei

Kairav:- oh

Kairu:- aur (pointing at ravan chachu/samarth)ye dadaji aur kya thee? oh ha fufa

Kairav:- oh kitna concuse(confusion) hei kuch smj nhi aya (he said counting something at his fingers)

K:- princess aap kyu usse confuse krlhe ho.

All the family members has questions for kartik but for the moment they were lost in the cuties

Kaira then Makes Kairav meet with other family members

Kaira(pointing towards manish):- aur ye dadu

Manish:- Dadu? princess

Kairu:- arre nhi dadu nhi dude

Manish:-ye huyi na baat hmari princess (he said and takes her in his arms lifting her up and gives a kiss on her cheek) Meine apko bhot miss kia

Kairu:- meine bhi(he puts her down)

Kairav(counting at her princess):- offo problem hogyi

Kairu:- kya hua

Kairav :- muje toh nine tk hi counting ati hein . ab mein kaise count kru family mein kitne log hei.(he said in his cute baby voice to which all the family members burst into laugh.But their laugh stops at a moment seeing someone and was immense shock. When Kartik sees in that direction he sees naira standing their at the door step)

(Kairav:- kitna confusion hei ,ye rishta )

K(To kaira):- princess please abhi room mein jao ,kairav aur vansh ko lekr please aap badme introduce kra lena kairav ko abhi sb bdo ko kuch kaam hei.

Kairu listened to him this time and takes kairav and vansh to her room.

All the family members was in the shocked state is underestimate seeing naira at the door step.

scene end

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// what should I do

1 )Kartik will Introduce naira as sirat new love of kartik  to goenkas as kairu's new mother

2) simple apologies to goenkas and telling stories

(Muje pta hein galiya pdne wali hein specially aajke precap ke baad.show nhi dekh rha pta nhi ku=yu precap dekh liya ispe pr phir bhi creative creticism)


Also plz check out my new story  (A kaira supergirl fanfiction)

https://www.wattpad.com/1066251471-star-crossed-relations-karamel-kaira-character

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