(Duvessa's POV)
The day before she fell into the coma.
Her father was at work like always her brother was at football practice. Duvessa was cleaning the house like usual. Her farther called and telling the blue eyed girl to start making dinner. She got out all the ingredients and start to cook. when she finished cooking she cleaned everything up and put the food
on the table. Her dad finally came home with her sweaty brother.
They all sat down and started to eat in silence. then the cimmerian girl asked her dad "how was work" and he started to talk about his boring day at work. They all finished eating and she started to clean up. Her brother went upstairs and had a shower and told the lonely girl to wash his clothes and tidy his room so his sister did as she was told and cleaned his room. After the sad lonely girl finished cleaning his room she got ready for bed. Then suddenly she started to have flashbacks when her mother committed suïcide.
She couldn't help but cry ever since that day it has been Morris duvessa life has changed .Her farther of his sixteen year old daughter has been put in the position as a mother figure of the house she hated to she never has time for herself. She is very virago and her father wanted her to break because he couldn't handel to children but he knew it would be hard for her to crack. Her brother dose not care for her she likes to think that he dose not all he dose it boss her around and treat her like she doesn't even exist to him. Duvessa hates how they treat her but she can't do anything about it our she would get punished. Her punishments were bad she would get beat tortured and wiped but when she tries to escape or run away they always find her.
She started to drift off to sleep and dream about having a beautiful life her mother and father cared for her they lived in a nice comfy house and did not clean or cook. But soon she came out of the wonderful dream and came back to reality. She has to wake up at 5:00 am every day so she can cook food for her father and brother as she was about to start cocking she felt rather sick and dizzy but thought nothing of it and carried on the she heard a ringing noise in her ear and her vision went blurry she couldn't she à thing it was all fuzzy and stared to feel her self faint but then realised she didn't eat for 4 days and became faint. Her family woke up found Duvessa on the floor and quickly took her to the
hospital and they found out that she was in a coma and did not know when she will wake.
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Hiraeth
Teenage Fiktion2 girls names Thana and Duvessa who are strangers to each other fall into a deep coma and meet but was it really a coma? They wake back to their lonely lives, longing+ determined to find each other. What do you think will happen next...
