More of a curiosity than a story, this is a word-for-word transcript of the original, handwritten outline I made for this story back in November 2014 (grammar errors and all). Hope you enjoy it! Don’t feel obligated to read/finish this if it gets dull, there will be another narrative omake coming soon ;0) Still, there are a few gems that never made it into the final version sprinkled throughout.
Also, I apologize in advance for the rampant formatting errors. I tried (with limited success) to duplicate the formatting of the original . . . .
John and Paul 1
Gas 4:00 PM
Town
Campout (in) NIGHT
Bagpipe museum
Lake (loch)
Castle NIGHT
Play music in countryside
Glasgow 12:00 Noon
4 PM, Chapter One
Tour bus arrives at remote gas station
Everyone gets out – bathroom, tea, or just to stretch their legs (J & P) or to make phone call
Brian: “Meet back here in ten minutes”
John and Paul see battered, 10-yr-old, silvery blue Ford Anglia – homemade “For sale” sign taped to inside of front windscreen
John goes back to bus to get their things, grabs his & Paul’s suitcases and his acoustic guitar
Paul buys car & road map, gets directions to next gas station from 60-something woman who works there
Paul insists on driving after the “Bournemouth incident”
Neil’s in phone booth, Mal’s standing outside – only he sees Ford Anglia screech out of Parking lot.
4:30 PM, Chapter 3
J & P reach 2nd gas station.
In parking lot they plan their rout: “It’ll still get us to Glasgow, it’ll just take us about a day and a half longer”
Buy lots of snack food, flashlights, portable radio, blankets, 2 cameras and a roll of film each. comic books
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Escape of the Nerk Twins
FanfictionAfter weeks of incessant touring, John and Paul decide to take a little vacation. They set off on what could be the road trip of a lifetime -- but Brian's furious! And George and Ringo are determined not to be left out of having some fun. Buckle in...
