Recap : piche jakar padh aao
Toh chaliye suru karte hai bina kisi bak............loli ke .
SHINKAI :
SHIVPUTRA ARRIVES AT SHINKAI ....
RAY : TUM ? TOH WAHI HO NA SHIVPUTRA ?
SHIV : OH SO BROTHER RAY KO MAIN YAD HU ?
RAY : KYU BACHAYA THA MUJHE ? I COULDVE FOUGHT...
SHIV : YOU ALSO KNOW THAT YOU WERE WEAK THERE .... AND KYU BACHAYA ? WELL MUJHE KOI TUMSE HAMDARDI NAHI HAI JUST MUJHE EK PUNCHING BAG CHAHIYE THA TO PRACTICE MY FUTURE FIGHT WITH KAAL .....
RAY : YOU...
SHIV :COME ON ...
RAY STRETCHES HIS HANDS AND HIS HAMMER APPEARS HE STARTS ATTACKING SHIV.
RAW SWINGS HIS HAMMER AT SHIV BUT SHIV DODGES IT AND PUNCHES RAY IN HIS CHEST....
Ray stumbles back and then attacks again shiva carries out same actions rays chest was aching badly now... ray swings his hammer thistime avoiding attack on his chest but shiv attacks at his forehead........ The fight continues for a long time ..... after breaking rays maximum bones shiv pierces his chest with his trident .... not piercing enough to kill just to make him bleed ......
Shiva : Aaj ke liye practice kafi tha will see you again .... probably ...... agar jinda rahe toh ...... ab futlo yaha se yeh mera area hai ab.....
Shiva then massacares shinkai's bad peoples and takes over the place....
Flashback :
Shiva : I have a plan ...
Tanya : What ??
Shiv : Main Ray ke heart ko forcibly change kar sakta hu .... uske thoughts ko completely reform karke aur use dev bhaiya jaisa thoughts deke ......
R.p : Yeh kaise mumkin hai ?
Shiv : praviti parivartan prakriya se ... maujhe uske liye 6 month tak shinkai yani ray ke birth place ko positive energy se charge karna hoga .... taki ray 6 months mein slowly change ho sake....
Tanya : Oi tum 6 months ke liye jarahe iska matlab ?
Shiv : Yep
Tanya : Okn Dev bhaiya ko tumhare bare mein sab kuch batana hampar chordo....
Note : main shiv ka convincing and all mein jyada nahi scenes rakh raha caz limelight shiv pe ajaega.
R.p : Par yeh tum karoge kaise ?
Shiv : Ill Fight ray fir dev bhaiya se shinkai mein fight karna hoga... aur us samay ray aur dev bhaiya dono ke man mein hatred hona chahiye....
Tanya : Isse toh tumhari jaan ko khatra hai ? Dev bhaiya holdback nahi karenge tumse ladte samay .....
Shiv : Maine yahi toh tumse kaha tha rooftop par....
Tanya visualises the scene ......
Flashback ends.......
Dharti lok :
Dev : Shinkai ? Woh shinkai mein chupa baitha hai aaj use main wahi marunga......
Tanya : Nahi bhaiya agar aapne use mardala toh........
Vivan : Toh kya didi ?
Dev : Uski energy ke wajah se har chij us area ki uske jaisi banajegi.... ...hmph....
Tanya : So u cant kill him .... right now....
Dev : Thik hai but Main usse aaj sara hisab chukta karke hi rahunga....
Debu flies to shinkai......
At shinkai.....
Deb : SHIVPUTRA ..... KAHA CHUPA BAITHA HAI.....GADDAR
SHIV : BALVEER URF MERE PYARE DEV BHAIYA......😈😈 ( IN MIND : SORRY BHAIYA AAPKI HATRED BADHANE KE LIYE I NEED TO PROVOKE YOU )
DEB : BHAIYA MAT BOL MUJHE TUH SHIV..... TERI TOH NAAM LENE MEIN BHI SHARAM ARAHI HAI EK DEVTA KA NAAM ISTEMAL KARKE ASUR BANTE SHARAM NAHI AAYI TUJHE.....
SHIV : BILKUL NAHI .... APKO AAYI THI KYA ? EK NORMAL INSAAN KO PARI BANATE HUE JUST BECAUSE YOU LIKES HER ?
DEBU : HAD MEIN RAHO SHIV.....
SHIV : TUM HAD MEIN RAHO BALVEER......
DEBU AND SHIV STARTS FIGHTING .... WHILE DEBU WAS ATTACKING SHIV HIS POSITIVE ENERGY WERE NEUTRALIZING RAYS NEGATIVE THOUGHTS THUS RAY WAS IN CONSTANT PAIN ........
THERE WERE CONSTANT WEAPONS CLASHING SOUNDS.... DEV OVERPOWERED SHIV SOON CAZ OF HIS EXPERIENCE IN COMBAT .....AND HIS HATRED TOO .....
DEV LIFTS HIS HAMMER TI KILL BUT SUDDENLY REMEMBERS ALL HIS MOMENNTS WITH SHIV.... HE PUTS DOWN HIS HAMMER .... AND FLIES OFF FROM SHINKAI....
DEV : ( FLYING OFF) JINDA REHNA HO TOH SHINKAI MEIN HI REHNA.....
KAAL LOK :
SHOUTING NOISES ......
RAY :AH.....AAHHHHHHHHHHHH...........YAAHHHHHHHHHHHH
BHAIMAR : RAY KYA HUA ....RAY.....
RAY : IDK BHAIMAR.....AHHH.AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA.........IM IN PAIN IS SHIVPUTRA NE PATA NAHI KYA KIYA................FIND HIM AND KILL HIM.... ...........PLEASE.................
RAY GETS VISION OF HIM BEING PIERCED .... BOILED ..... HIS PIERCEINGS BEING DRESSED WITH CHILLI POWDER ....AND ALL ....THOSE AND FEELS ITS PAIN AS A PUNISHMENT BEFORE TRANSFORMATION.......
HE CONSTANTLY HEARS VOICE OF SHIVPUTRA CHANTING OM NAMAH SHIVAY..........WHICH S.P WAS CHANTING DURING THE YAGYA AT SHINKAI......
YEAH THE SIX MONTHS TORCH9R STARTED....WHERE SHIV PUTRA AND RAY BOTH WERE IN PAIN....ONE FOR HIS SINS .... OTHER FOR DOING GODLY YAGYAS BEING A MORTAL......
Veerlok :
Shaurya : Balveer Kaal ne ek aur hamshakal ko mardiya par ajib bat yeh hai ki uski sari urja sirf kaal ko mili.....
DEBU : ISKA MATLAB KAAAL AUR BHI JYADA SHAKTISHALI HOGAYA ???
SHAURYA : HA BALVEER AB TUM BHI USSE NAHI JIT SAKTE....
DEBU : KOI TOH RASTA HOGA NA SHAURYA.....?
SHAURYA : SIRF EK HI RASTA HAI........
TO BE CONTINUED
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