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Author: curly_and_lou

Summary: Harry is a succesful pornstar for a gay website. Louis is the straight newbie that starts this job because of a wrecked situation at home. They have to work together and grow closer as friends, all to the distaste of Ed, Harry's boyfriend.

Storyline: 7/10
The approaches of this idea were pretty good but I think something is missing while simultaneously some things could have been left out or written differently. The description of how they did shoot the pornvideos cracked me up, it was hilarious.

Writing style: 6/10
It was quite alright, not over the top amazing but not bad either.

Characters: 6/10
Harry gave me a bit of a whiplash with his moodswings regarding his feelings. Ed was annoying. But all in all they were all quite alright.

Fluff/smut: 6/10
They had their cute adorable moments and also their tension filled ones. Since they make porn movies there is definitely smut.

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