taming Mr. Tomlinson

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Author: makemadej

Summary: Harry and Liam are teacher at the same highschool and also flatmates and best friends. When a new literary teacher starts working there, Harry is determined to impress him the best he can. But he couldn't have guessed that this leads in a prank war between the two of them.

Storyline: 6/10
it's the typical teacher AU storyline, where they hate each other in the beginning and then get closer. Mixed with a lot second hand embarrassment and a lot of tension.

Writing style: 6/10
It was a okay writing style, but sometimes I had to read a paragraph twice to get what the author was trying to say.

Characters: 5/10
Okay I think I never disliked a Harry more than this one. He was so dumb, oblivious, childish and just stupid. I really couldn't believe how dumb someone can be. Louis in the other hand was a bit mean in the beginning but he is the most normal out of all of them. Liam is the cute supporting but a bit dumb best friend. Niall and Zayn make a small appearance.

Fluff/smut: 8/10
They had their cute moments (mostly towards the end of the story) but the smut and the tension was hella good. Like damn.

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