Jara sa jhoom lu mai

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Pramod doesn't find any cabs on the way so they decide to walk 

Susheela was wearing heels and she wasn't comfortable and was stumbling and pushing Pramod by mistake everytime

P: na dhakka de ke gira do muh ke bal? 

S: hehe.....wo chalte nhi bana raha na...sab...sab hil raha h naa...

Earthquake to nhi 

Pramod holds suheela tightly

P: nashedi ko sab hilta hi dikhta h

S:hawww kon na- nashedi 

Pramod walks slowly with Susheela

She still wasn't able to walk

S: rukoooooooo

P: kya hua

S: wo..wo heels me chalte nahi ban raha naaa...utra lene do pleaseeee

P: ...........

Susheela bends down to open her sandals but she's not able to be still and open it

P: ruko I'll do 

Pramod goes to his knees to open her sandals

Meanwhile suheela runs her hands in Pramod's hair 

S: good goddy...oh nahi wait.. doggy ...han 

Good doggy

Pramod takes her heels off and stands holding her hand and pulls her close

P: this doggy can bite too isliye aache se raho

S: hawww☹️... Mera goddy baddy h 

P: 😂😂😩😂😂

P: tum naa 

Susheela runs barefoot and then faces Pramod

S: ptaaa kesi feeling aa rahi h

P:(mumbles) bass ludak mat jana 

S: jara sa jhoom lu maiiii

P:...............

S:Mr. Goddy tum to bollywood bhi recreate nahi kar sakte 

P: 😑 han mai bad goddy hu na 

S: jara sa ghoom lu mai 

P:(mumbling)sir ghoom raha h par isko ghumna h 

S: runs to Pramod 

Aa tujhe chum lu maiii 

P: aree na re baba naaaa (P be like hosh me chumna😂)

S pushes Pramod and runs again 

S: mai chalii banke hawaaaaaa

P:(facepalm) rabba mere mainu bacha😩😂

Pramod runs behind Susheela and picks her up on his back 

S: utaro mujhe.. mujhe dance karna h 

P: chup...ekdum chup... Sidhe se pakad lo mujhe aur chalo 

S: aaj mai upar Asmaa neecheee  

Vese Pramod asama to upar hi h... Mujhe upar jana h

P: bohat jaldi h upar jane ki naa😑

Apne purane gane pe hi raho 


The whole way back Susheela keeps on singing jara sa jhoom lu mai on loop 

And dropping her sandals in between many times, irritating Pramod at her max 



Aaj jaldi update 😙

How was this? 

Upcoming 2 are going to be rom com parts too

Haven't actually written much comedy or romance as a matter of fact so reviews matter 💁🏻‍♀️



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