Galaxy Kookies ent.

Audition #38

Name: Roxy ( @whatspoppinbts )
Face: Shannon
Age: 18
Band/Solo: Band
Songwriting theme: storytelling, insecurity
DOB: May 26th
Personality: easygoing, outgoing, approachable, kind, considerate
Nationality: Korean/British(Welsh roots)

song:

Verse:

Chasing dreams
It's not as easy as it seems
I live in a cruel world called planet earth
But a place like this makes me wonder "what am I worth?"
You don't know me but choose to judge me
Why am I stared at like an object?
Growing up I didn't realize I was different
Till the day reality shot me like a son of a gun
These foreign words like "hybrid" stripped my self-esteem
Angels and demons inside me fought for my true identity
I wish there is a way to find serenity
Animal skin on lamps and floors
They don't belong there but there's no such laws
I seriously beg equality for the people of my kind
Others don't see pain because they are blind

Bridge:

Before, I used to isolate myself from mankind
Now, you'll see the real me
You'll soon call me Queen B

Chorus:

Meet my friend Karma, just you wait till she harms ya
All my girls don't fear
Ignore the hate you hear
Don't be afraid, be who you want to be
The rainstorm will fade
And a rainbow will invade
So hang on
Hang on

Verse 2:

"Home sweet home" I don't believe in those things
Where ever I go I can't free my wings
They say I'm not enough of this or that
But now I know what position I'm at
Sticks and stones will break my bones, though words will definitely hurt me
Because bruises on skin heal faster than a hurting heart
When will these insecurities come to an end?
Maybe one day life will be my friend
Hopefully, I won't hide from reality by then
One day everything will be ten out of ten
If I find my happiness again
Overcoming your fears is what makes you stronger
So thank your enemies 'cause you won't be thinking these things any longer
Though, I shan't be fooled by criticism
Since critical people are your help in disguise
I'm staring at the mirror trying to find me
And it comes to realisation that the enemy to overcome
Is only myself

Bridge:

Before, I used to isolate myself from mankind
Now, you'll see the real me
You'll soon call me Queen B

Chorus:

Meet my friend Karma, just you wait till she harms ya
All my girls don't fear
Ignore the hate you hear
Don't be afraid, be who you want to be
The rainstorm will fade
And a rainbow will invade
So hang on
Hang on

-x-x-

Lyrics sense: 10/10
How easily it flowed: 9/10
Grammar: 10/10

I loved it! It was amazing and the sense was amazing too! PASS

9/10