page one
jack looks acrose the room for max
and as he looks around he sees his crush max
then walks up to him but he's texting his girlfreind
"you should break up with her he sayed
and then Kaden and Max
but fortnight
said max
aah you have souch a way with words said jack
but his jelousy for silica continued as they had a great lunch together
then after luch jack vowed to murder silica
chapter 2
the next day jack was missing from school and max said a sad "but fortnight"
meenwhile jack was in an epic sword fight with silica
silica fought hard but was no match for jacks jelosy
the next day max was sad silica had not replied to him
jack slowly convinced max to break up with silica
chapter 3
the next day max was very sad and was regretting breaking up with silica
jack comforted him "you don't need her she's a ho"
"but fortnight" said max
" i know your sad but i love you" said jack
chapter 4
but fortnight?!?!? max said
um no i didn't say i love you meant i-uuuhh uuummm jack said
i said i dove poo jack said
that doesn't make any sense joel said
you don't dove poo you love max you told me yesterday joel said
uuuuuuhhhh said jack
max immediately got up and left
jack punched joel for interfering with his love
sombody had to say it joel said
chapter 5
all weekend jack was extremely depressed he knew he had messed up and that it wasn't Joel's fault
he had written a thousand dm's to max but didn't have the courage to send one of them
but on Monday he went into the lunch room where he saw max
and max ran over for a kiss
they kissed and when it was over jack leaned in for another one
but a telegram came in and it said that the autopsy had read a butterfly knife had killed silica
and max realized who killed the girl he loved it was jack
max yelled an angry BUT FOOOOOOOOOOORTNIIIIIIIIGHT and punch max with the force of a thousand sun's
jack was devastated right when he kissed max he might have lost him forever chapter 6 is filmed infront of a live studio adience.
jack groanded as the pain of being puched didn't hurt as much as the pain of getting rejected
i thought max got punched said kaden
remember the writers an idiot said joel
crowd laughs
anyway whats for dinner said kaden
crowd laughs
shut up said kaden all i can think about is max said jack
all i can think about is dinner kaden said
crowd laughs
serously i might have lost him forever you know i love him, could you go talk to max jack said.
only if you feed me
crowd laughs
chapter 7
kaden walked into max's apartment
he saw max sitting angerly on the couch
look i know your mad at jack for killing silica kaden said
but fortnight max said
look if you hate jack why did you kiss him in the first place.
you obviously still like him kaden said
but fortnight max said
i know he killed silica but you still like him and he likes you
think mark
i mean max kaden said
chapter 8 the reckoning
That night jack was dreaming
Hello said grandpa
Grandpa, what are you doing here? Said Jack
i'm here to give advice you nincompoop said grandpa
ok said jack
the plan is to make a bunch of hot cakes
then grandpa died again never telling him how to make max love him again
then morning came and jack went to school not knowing what would happen
and he didn't even have time to make hot cakes
but when he went into the lunch room max looked at jack ran over and kissed him
ha gaaaaaayyyy said heidi
iknow right said joel
thats kinda the point said kaden
i thought you hated me said jack
but fortnight max said
the end
