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Secrets of Immortals by ABCDEFGH10_1
Grammar & Spelling: 9/10
Introduction of Plot: 10/10
Description: 9.5/10
Tone Setting: 9/10
Overall Excellence: 9.5/10
JUDGE'S NOTE:
Oh my goodness, the talent you have as a writer is unreal. The descriptions, the themes, the plot, the characterization, the tone -- everything is done with skill and precision. I think I saw two punctuation errors, but that's the extent of my criticisms -- other than the fact that the chapter was a little short for your writing style. The introduction of the plot and the tone setting are intriguing and made me completely engrossed in this story you're telling. This is more well done than a lot of the better-performing books on wattpad, honestly. Your descriptions are impeccable, and the first paragraph is the perfect starter for your story. I loved it. You're extremely talented. - Ember
Baby Harry's Day In by marina_swampert
Grammar and Spelling: 8.5/10
Introduction of Plot: 8/10
Description: 8.5/10
Tone Setting: 9.5/10
Overall Excellence: 9.5/10
JUDGE'S NOTE:
This first chapter is so charming and humorous. Baby Harry is such a fun character, and his mind is so fun to go into, especially when he keeps describing everything his dad says as heroic. You managed to connect with me through this little, adorable chapter about 'Harry "Otter" as a baby. On the down side, I did find a few grammatical errors, although they are very commonplace and anyone could make them. A few words (mostly at the starts of sentences) aren't capitalized as they should be. Other than that, I was completely charmed by this endearing, happy chapter. - Ember
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Dawn of The Day by CBMokedi
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