Gum hein Kisi ke pyaar mein ( my version)

part-1( The promise)

Sai pov
i was having my ultrasound  to check if everything is alright
as usual my husband didn't come
he called me saying he was stuck in something important
and i don't know if it was really a work or something else
i tried to avoid it  and began talking to the doctor
doctor : as you can also see
it's not your fault
of what happened
you are still young
you can try again
but this time it will be a bit difficult
however there is nothing to be worried
we will monitor regularly
how many times are you having s**
sai: once a month or
twice
doctor : you might want to increase it
if you want to have a chance again
sai: i have been trying it's just my husband
he is reluctant
doctor : you know if he or you want to have an alternative method
we can always try for ivf
but i do encourage you to conceive naturally
sai: how much will that treatment cost
doctor : per cycle it might be 60k
sai: i don't know if my husband will spend that much on me
we might not take that option
and my financials are not great that now
doctor : i understand
but sai you need to think about your self
when was the last time
you ate well
look at you
you even dropped your weight
try to think about you
sai: i just miss my child doctor
i can't happen to be normal anymore
doctor : does your family know your pain
tell them sai
you need comfort
sai: i don't know if anyone will listen to me
doctor : don't say like that sai
you need help
and you need to ask for it
sai: i will try doctor
thank you
sai pov
i left the consultation with the reports
if the loss of my father was saddening
loss of my child was making me break
but i took the advice of the doctor
i can still try
this is not the end of the world
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virat pov
my child
i still can't get over the fact
that my dream of becoming of father
came by to a halt at this state
i try to blame it on sai
but i also know she is not the one to blame
poor her
she lost her father
samrat
and this loss must be killing her
i tried to talk to her many times
but our words were often left incomplete
as i was thinking how to get through to sai
i heard kaku call me
kaku: you are home early virat
but it's good time
pakhi was about to leave to temple
to pray for samrat
can you accompany her
virat pov
that's when i realized
i can also pick up sai from the college
on the way back
virat: ok
pakhi pov
i was on cloud nine
when virat said i could go with him
i sat next to him in the car
and was ready to talk to him
when the first thing he said was
virat: i also need to pick up sai
on the way
pakhi : what?
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pakhi pov
i wanted to spend some time with virat without that sai
so i began to emotionally manipulate him about samrat
pakhi : you know virat
when samrat was alive
we used to go this temple all the time
it used to bring happiness
i see you are also not happy with samrats passing away
virat : samrat was like a brother to me pakhi
and yes i miss him a lot
pakhi: it's good to see at least you truly cared for samrat
some people say he was like a brother
and took his life
virat: pakhi please
not now
you know it's not sai's fault
pakhi: whoever fault it was
in the end
i lost everything
virat: and i'm really sorry about it
but please try to overcome it
i can't see you like this pakhi
pakhi : im trying virat
it's just it's taking me time to adjust
virat : we are near college
i will call sai
**********phone conversation ***************
virat: hello sai
where are you
sai: i just finished my class
going back home
virat: im waiting outside come fast
sai: i thought you were busy
virat: i completed the work fast sai
come now
sai: ok
i need to discuss with you something
can we go out now
virat: where
sai: some where peaceful
i want to share what the doctors said to me
virat: is it bad
sai: no it's nothing like that
there are a couple of options
we need to think
virat: ok
let's talk
come now
sai : 2 mins
i'm coming near the parking area
**********end of phone conversation*******
sai pov
there was a hope in his call
that he wanted to talk with me
i was thinking may be today
we will finally sort out everything
stop behaving like strangers
and decide what we want for future
i was very excited seeing the police vehicle
i was about to open the door
when i saw pakhi didi already sitting beside virat sir
pakhi: im already here sai
virat: sai sit in the back
for this one time
sai: you said we can talk
but i don't want to talk in pakhi didis presence
virat: i didn't mean that
i was just dropping pakhi in the temple
we can go somewhere after that
please come and sit
sai: you can go
se can't talk at home
virat : sai what are you doing
come inside
sai: i don't want to be a third wheel
virat sir
you go with pakhi didi
i will take my bus
virat: sai don't create a scene here
come and sit
sai pov
my heart was really felling the pain
just today
would he die not to be with pakhi
but i controlled my self
enough of tears
i had to take my life into my hands
sai: i will sit
only if i'm given my place
pakhi didi please sit at the back
virat: sai ..
sai: who is your wife virat sir
me or pakhi didi
tell me
who has the right to sit
pakhi: relax sai this is just a seat
sai: just a seat
then sit in the back pakhi didi
pakhi : you are insulting me sai
sai: then making me sit at the back
is it not an insult
virat : sai please shut up
we are on road
what will people think
sai: that's something pakhi didi should learn
what will people think
virat : sai ..
pakhi : it's ok virat
i should learn to control my rights
looks like i can't even go out with my friend anymore
i understand
virat: pakhi please don't talk like that
pakhi: im leaving
you sai enjoy your seat
virat: pakhi please don't do this
let me drop you
pakhi: no virat
i should learn
with samrat gone
i should understand that all relationships have gone
virat : pakhi ..
sai: if your done pakhi didi
can you move aside
i need to sit
please start the car virat sir
pakhi didi knows the route to our house pretty well
sai pov
i know virat sir was annoyed with me
as pakhi didi left
but i didn't care
there is a line for this relationship
which both of them never seem to care
pakhi pov
i was fuming when sai and virat left
fine sai
you think you have won soon
you will face humiliation
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sai pov
as expected my husband was again angry with me
because of pakhi didi
virat: you should have seen pakhis face
she was suffering
sai: are you done
for the past 30 mins
you were talking about pakhi didi
but did you ask me
how my appointment went
i lost our child
my baby is gone
did you anytime have any remorse for it
while i was getting checked up
you were enjoying time with pakhi didi
what pain do you understand
virat sir
did you even love our child
your own blood
or was that kid also after pakhi didi
virat: now you are crossing the line sai
for me my kid was everything
and even you know i love only you
sai: but your actions don't say that virat sir
you are hurtful
and i'm starting to regret ever getting married to you
virat: sai please stop it
never say that word
that you regret marrying me
i love you sai
i'm hurt because we lost our baby
please never say that i care about pakhi more than you or our child
please
sai pov
seeing him being emotional about that baby
brought back the memories
of how we built the cradle together
how virat sir
would stay up all night just touching my tummy
as we got emotional
i began to talk
sai: the doctor gave me options today
but before i tell you the options
i need promise from you
virat : what promise?
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author pov
what's the promise ?
will virat promise sai
let's see in the next chapter
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