Ok when I was younger I used to write on the notes app
I made a fanfic called bepper is my sis but that's not the point
In the story this is how I made the characters talk
Bepper: hello star
Star: hello bepper
And this is how I should have made the characters talk
"Hello star" bepper said looking at her "hello bepper" she said
Note: you don't have to add the bepper said looking at her the only thing you need to add is bepper said but adding the other stuff makes the story better
