Sunfloro Poetry Awards [CLOSED]

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1. The Playgirl and her Toy by TessaYoung5

Cover/title - 8/10

Flow of words - 11/15

Grammar / Spelling / Vocabulary - 14/15

Writing style - 13/15

Poetic devices - 10/15

Emotions - 8/10

Originality - 9/10

Enjoyment - 8/10

Total - 81/100

Review : I love how beautifully constructed this poem is. The vocabulary, and the way you've structured the poem makes the reader fall into it. The only advice I would give you is to make your sentences shorter, adding breaks, commas and periods when needed. Other than this, your poem is lovely.

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2. Maybe sit by me papersxpen

Cover/title - 8/10

Flow of words - 11/15

Grammar / Spelling / Vocabulary - 13/15

Writing style - 12/15

Poetic devices - 9/15

Emotions - 8/10

Originality - 8/10

Enjoyment - 9/10

Total - 78/100

Review - The poem is very meaningful and deep. I love the structure and the way you've broken the sentences for each stanza. A little advice I would give you is to use more poetic devices such as similes and alliteration to bring more emotion into your poem. Other than that, your poem has been beautifully crafted.

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3. Her Demons by wild_imaginator16

Cover / title - 8/10

Flow of words - 9/15

Grammar / Spelling / Vocabulary - 12/15

Writing style - 13/15

Poetic devices - 8/15

Emotions - 9/10

Originality - 9/10

Enjoyment - 8/10

Total - 76/100