~Visiting the Sanatorium~
"Are you sure this is a good idea?" Yuki asked.
"Come on Yuki, don't be like that. This will be fun." Jack says.
"Let's just hope paintball players don't show up," Naomi said.
The three friends walk into the building, Yuki follows behind Jack, while Naomi walks on the right side of Jack.
"Yo, Jack," Naomi said.
"What do you want," Jack says.
"Which way should we go?" Naomi says.
They looked inside the building to see the left side destroyed and the right side more stable. Yuki stares at both sides not liking anything about the place.
"Let's go to the right side it looks way more stable than the left side," Jack says.
"Can we leave? I don't have a good feeling about this... I feel like someone is watching us..." Yuki says.
"Don't be such a pussy, Yuki," Jack says.
"I'm getting a bad feeling too.." Naomi said.
"Who's gonna come out," Jack said rolling his eyes "Slenderman- Ah! HEY!!" Naomi smacked Jack who was teasing Yuki.
"Stop teasing her already," Naomi sighed "Follow me."
The group walks through the hall and jumps out the window going through the back. As they walk they hear steps inside the building.
"W-What was that..?" Yuki stuttered she then whimpered a little and said "Let's just get out of here already, please..."
"I have to agree on this.." Naomi said. Jack stares at the structure to see a figure on the 3rd floor of the building.
"I just saw someone in the window!" Jack yelled.
"Let's run.. NOW!!" Naomi yelled back.
Naomi takes off running away from the structure, and Jack and Yuki started to run behind her. All three of them run until they reach Yuki's house. They run inside the house and lock the door, as they slowly started to catch their breath Yuki spoke up.
"Never again..." She said. Laying down on the ground.
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This story was based on a Flash story in my Beginning Writing class. The structure was based on the Brestovac Sanatorium, Zagreb, Croatia. The only information I had about the building was "Just the word sanatorium is enough to raise goosebumps...but imagine an abandoned sanatorium, once a medical facility for those suffering from tuberculosis, crumbled into ruins. Built in the early 1900's, the treatment center was the brainchild of a doctor who fell in love with a theatre actress who later contracted tuberculosis. After it's beginnings as a state-of-the-art medical facility, the building was converted into a military hospital during the world wars, which means the ruins have seen more than their fair share of tragedy. When the building fell into disrepair, it was eventually abandoned to slow decay. Today, the building is open to people with a thirst of exploration, but watch out: it is also frequently used as a hideout for paintball enthusiasts."
I also got a picture to go with it but most of it was just my imagination. I do hope you enjoyed this story.
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Short story's I make for class
AdventureThis was a story for my class but decided to write it here too, I don't know if I will get the other story that was a little inspiration for this from my other class😂 but here's my Story Elements for my class I'll maybe draw a Cover
