Rishta humara

Decision

Kinjal ke jaane ke baad 

Suman ma:- agar kinjal ki baad sach h to ye bachchi arohi Raavi ki hi beti h usne mere bete ko dokha dia h achcha hua us jesi ldki mere bete ki jindagi se chali gai

Goumbi:- ky glt kia h Raavi ne ma raavi ki beti ese hi kisi rah chalte insan k sath nhi hui h uske pati se hui h jisse uski sadi hui thi

Suman ma:- Saadi to mere bete se bhi hui thi na use to chod kr chali gai

Rishita:- Oh please ma aap bhi janti ho ki raavi q shiva q chod kr gai or sach ye h jitna raavi k jaane me shiva ka hath tha utna aapka mera hum sb ka tha humne kbhi raavi ka sath nhi dia us din jb shiva ne raavi ke character pr question kia aapne shiva ko kuch bola are uske baad bhi aapne shiva ko kuch nhi bola na ghar me kisi or ne bola or jb raavi ne shiva ki beizzati ki thi use bazar me thappad maara tb to aapne than lia tha ki raavi shiva k layak nhi h usko taane mar mar kr jeena mushkil kr dia tha is ghar me rhna mushkil kr dia tha tb bhi shiva glt tha or aapne uska sath dia or ab bhi aap raavi k character pr baat kr rhe ho

Dhara:- or rahi baat shiva ko dhoka dene ki maa to sayad aap bhul rhe h raavi ke jaane k next din hi raavi ne divorce paper bhej die the jispe shiva ne sign bhi kia tha chahe galti se ho kese bhi pr sign kie or divorce hua to ab kesa dhoka kesi sadi ma.

(A/N:- guys raavi ne jane k baad shiva ko divorce paper bhej die the pr shiva raavi k jane k baad itna sadme me tha us din kuch jameen k paper bhi aane the or dono paper mix ho gae or usne bin dekhe paper sign kr dia or unka divorce ho gya (i know bohat lame h pr story k lie yehi sahi h sorry))

Dev:- hn maa shiva bina divorce die dusri ldki k sath sagai kre saadi ki baat bdae to thik h pr raavi divorce hone k baad bhi kisi se sadi na kre ye to glt baat h na

Suman ma:- me tum sb ki baat manti hu pr koi to mere bete ko bhi samjho isme uski ky  glti h us ldki se pyar krne ki saza to mere bete ko mil rhi h

Krish:- shiva se pyar krne ki saza to raavi bhabhi ko mili thi maa jb se saadi hui thi tb se taane nafrat beizzati k alava ky dia h humne are raavi bhabhi bachpan se is ghar me aana chahti thi vo perfect thi humare ghar k lie pr humne hi kbhi unki kadra nhi ki or saza sirf shiva ko nhi raavi bhabhi ko bhi mili h agar ab unhone is rishte ko peeche chod kr khi achchi jagah apni duniya bnayi jha izzat h pyar h to ky glt h ma

Dev:- or tu mane ya na mane maa raavi k dard k peeche uske ghar chod kr jane k peeche jitna haath shiva ka h utna humara bhi h

Goumbi:- or maa agar ab vo bachchi apni life me khush h to hum use khush rhne dete h na or hum bhi apni life me khush rhte h

Dhara:- hn maa rishita ka kaam h kinjal se to vo dono mil lenge hum kosis krege ki hum na hi mile

Suman ma:- tumhe jo sahi lge vo kro

(Suman leaves or phir ek ek krke sb chale jate h phir shiva bhi apne kamre me chala jata h)

(Shiva kinjal ki or baaki ghar valo ki saari baate yaad krta h)

Shiva:-q kia esa raavi q ky tera pyar itna kamzor tha ki tu mujhe itni jaldi bhul gai itni jaldi tune apni duniya bna di q

(Shiva soul appeare)

Shiva soul :-  q nhi bna skti tune bhi to bnai thi na disha k time

Shiva :- are pr meri to mazburi thi na mene to maa ke kehne pr ki thi sagai pr raavi ne q vo esa kese kr skti h

Shiva s :- ho skta h raavi ki bhi mazboori ho  tu sayad bhul rha h yaad kr kinjal ne kha tha kuch circumstances ki vjah se raavi ne saadi ki 

Shiva:- saadi ki to bachchi q or vo bhi 1 mahine me esa kese kr skti h vo ese kese aage bad skti h vo

Shiva soul :- q nhi bd skti shiva agar itne time ki sadi me tum dono k beech kuch nhi hua iska mtlb ye nhi ki uske or uske pati k beech me bhi kuch na ho or tu phir se us pr gussa ho rha h or kis haq se tu khud bta ky glt kia h raavi ne

Shiva:- kuch glt nhi kia h raavi ne meri raavi kbhi glt nhi kr skti pr me uski life me kisi or ko nhi dekh skta pyar krta hu usse or uski life meri jagah koi or aajae nhi bardast kr paunga

Shiva soul:- vo to aa bhi gya or gya bhi tu bhul rha h uska pati mar chuka h ab tu ky krega raavi ko akela chod dega ki ye sb hone k baad bhi use apnaega use or uski beti ko apnaega ab ye teri marji h soch le bohat time h humare pass

(Shiva soul disappear) 

Next Morning

(Sare ghar vale neeche hote h nasta kr ke kaam pr ja rhe hote h shiva ready hokr ma or goura k pau chuta h (normally) phir vo rishita k pav chuta h)

Rishita:- ye ky kr rha h shiva

Shiva:- bhabhi aaj me bohat important kaam ki suruaat krne ja rha hu uske lie mujhe aaka bhi ashirvad chahie

Suman ma:- esa ky krne ja rha h beta 

Shiva:- apni raavi ko ghar lane ki suruat krne ja rha hu maa

(Everyone is happy except ma )

Suman ma :-  tu us ldki ko is ghar me q la rha h jo tujhe chod kr kisi or k sath chali gai are usne to palat k tujhe dekha bhi nhi dubara ki tu khush h ya nhi 

Shiva:- or palat kr dekhti to ky krti ma us bechari k vapas aane ki vjah di thi humne tu hi bta ma agar papa tere sath vo sb krte jo mene raavi k sath kia to tu ky krti ma mene kbhi raavi ko dokha nhi dia pr use dil me dene vala dard bohat dia h use ese treat kia jese vo mere lie kuch h hi nhi ma us bechari ki to kismat bachpan se kharab thi use kbhi family ka pyar hi nhi mila phle mummy papa chale gae mama mami ne bohat pyar dia pr ma baap nhi bn skte the vo is ghar me saadi hi apni life me family ki kami puri krne k lie krna chahti thi jo humne kbhi puri nhi ki humari sadi k baad itni taklif sahi usne are mere lie usne aapni masi ma se bhi rishta tod dia or mene ky kia use sirf taklif di humesha dusro ko unki khushi ko uski(Raavi) khushi k upar rakha humesha use dard dia or ma dev sahi kh rha tha raavi k dukh k peeche jitni glti meri h utni bakio ki bhi h use kbhi tujhse vo ma vala pyar mila hi nhi dhara bhabhi ko di manti thi pr phir bhi unhone bhi apne dever ko usse phle chuna har baar q vo dard sahe ma are ma vo bechari to mujhe chod kr jha apni duniya basai vha bhi uska pati saheed ho gya ma agar uska character esa hi hota to vo us bachchi ko gira deti or apni life kisi or k sath suru kr skti thi pr nhi ki usne us 1 mahine k rishte ko sambhala us bachchi ko parvarish di h ma or baap dono ka pyar dia h tu hi bta agar vo rishta nibhane vali na hoti to ky vo 1 mahine k rishte ka bojh uthati are maa use chod usne to humari 1hli sadi bhi nibhai thi use tb divorse mene dia tha usne nhi or ma me janta hu vo mujhse aaj bhi pyar krti h mene humari sagai ki angunthi uske gale me dekhi thi party me ma Raavi ne apne rishte ko bachane k lie tyag, mamta, sehenshilta jitne goon ek achchi ldki me hone chahie sb dikhae h ab meri baari h ab rishte ko bachane ki or raavi ko uski khushiya dene ki baari baari meri h 

(sb ki aankho me aanshu hote h)

Suman ma:- ky tu raavi k saath us bachchi ko bhi apnaega

Shiva:- hn ma us bachchi me meri raavi ka hissa h

Suman ma:- to tey rha raavi k sath aarohi bhi is ghar me aaegi or pure samman k sath vese hi rahegi jese chiku or chutki rhte h ab tu ja meri bahu or meri poti ko is ghar me vapas le aa

Dhara:- itna aasan nhi hoga ma shiva ki vjah se raavi bohat hurt hui h ise use manana pdega

Rishita:- to mnaega na bhabhi or hum sb bhi apni kosis krege use mnane ki ab devrani best h to use mnane k lie thode papad to belne pdege na

(Every one laugh)

Shiva Pov:- ab dekh tu chipkali tera ye bandar kese tujhe mnakr apne pass vapas lata h

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Shruti