A/N :- guys i know aap sb is part ka wait kr rhe h or me bohat late upload kr rhi hu pr i dont know but something is wrong from my side as mujhe pta h meri story kha jana h mujhe ky krna h iske sath pr jb me likhne k lie aati hu mujhe words nhi mil pa rhe h pta nhi tb kuch esa hota h mera mind block ho jata h sorry for your inconvinience
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Raavi or baki sb vapas singhaniya mension aa jate h raavi pure raste shant hoti h kisi se kuch nhi bolti arthav or chini ko kuch pta nhi hota pr raavi ko ese dekh kr koi kuch nhi bolta
Singhaniya mension
Chini(slowly to kinjal) :- momo ky hua hum buddy k ghar se itni jaldi q aa gae mujhse kuch glti hui h ky
Kinjal :- chini bachcha ab aap apne room me jao hum kl baat krte h ohk
Chini :- ohk gud night momo gud night arthu slowly gud night mimi
Chini apne room me chali jati h tabhi shiva ghar k bahar aa jata h raavi use dekhti h or main get band kr deti h
Shiva :- raavi please get khol yrr mujhse baat kr yrr manta hu bhabhi ne jo kia glt kia pr uski saza tu mujhe to mt de yrr please raavi darvaza khol
saying this shiva sit on floor taking support of door and athor side raavi site at same position
Raavi :- teri ky glti shiva glti teri hi h dhara di ko mere character pr sawal uthane ka haq mila qki tune unhe vo haq dia unhone mere character pr sawal uthaya shiva qki phle tune uthaya ,tune kbhi logo ko meri insult krne se nhi roka, or kisi or ka q jb mera khud ka pati mere character pr sawal uthaega meri disrespect krega to duniya to kregi na
Shiva :- dekh raavi please tu shant ho ja sun me dhara bhabhi ko bol aaya hu ki unka ab humari life pr koi haq nhi h meri life me interfere krne ka ya tujhse kuch bolne ka ya teri beizzati krne ka
Raavi :- shiva galti dhara di ki nhi h bachpan se tum bhaiyo ne unhe itna pyar dia h ma se bhi jyada to agar achanak se tum unse jyada kisi or ko importance donge to unhe bura nhi lgega or unhone jo ky vo sb glt tha pr uska reason unki insecurity thi itne saal jinko bachcho ki trh pala jinke lie khud ka bachcha nhi kia or vo log phir esa krege to insecurity to hogi na
Shiva :- to unki insecurity ki saza me q bhugtu raavi please me pichle 5 saal se tujhse dur hu manta hu vo meri glti thi or ab me use sudhar rha hu pr ab me kisi or ki insecurity ki vjah se tujhe dubara nhi kho skta please raavi samjh na
Raavi :- teri insecurity ki saza bhi to mene bhukti h na aaj tk shiva, shiva tujhe yaad h humari 1st shadi k baad tujhe lgta tha ki tu pda likha nhi h tu mere layak nhi h islie tune mujhse duri banana suru kia tune kbhi mujhse nhi pucha ki tu ky chahti h raavi shiva tu or dhara di ek had tk same hi ho agar dhara di ka bachcha na peda krna unka decision tha or uski saza hum sb ne bhugti to pdai chodne ka decision bhi tera tha pr uski saza aaj tk mene bhugti h humesha tera km pada likha hona tere under insecurity lata h tujhe lgta tha ki tu logo se km h pr esa nhi tha shiva tujhe lgta tha ki agar mujhe koi well settled, well-behaved, pada likha ldka milega to me uske sath chali jaungi pr mene humesha teri seerat se pyar kia tha teri masumiyat or tere dil se pyar kia tha or tujhe me kbhi chod nhi skti thi islie itna kuch hua phir bhi me tere sath thi dunia k ma ke tere tane sune phir bhi tera sath nhi choda shiva pr jb baat mere character pr aai dubara tb mera sabar tut gya shiva phle bhi jb tune mere character pr sawal uthae the tb bhi mene maaf kia tha ye soch kr ki tu nafrat krta tha mujhse islie vo sb kia pr itne saal dur rhkr samjh aaya vo sb nafrat nhi thi teri isecurity thi shiva or sorry pr ab me teri insecurity k sath nhi rh paungi abhi tu badla h abhi tu gussa h dhara di se pr jb me tujhe maaf kr dungi tu vapas dhara di ko maaf kr dega or bhabhi jaap suru kr dega tujhe pta h shiva me us ghar me q aana chahti thi qki us ghar me vo tha jo mere pass kbhi nhi tha me bachapan se dhara di jesi bnana chahti thi qki me chahti thi jesa pyar or respect dhara di ko milti h vesi hi mujhe bhi mile mujhe ek pyar krne vali family chahie thi jese dhara di ki ek chot pr tum sb khade ho jate the vese me chahti thi ki koi ho jo mere chot lgne pr mere dukhi hone pr sb kuch badal de pr esa pyar family se to chodo mujhe kbhi mere pati se bhi nhi mila.
Shiva :- mujhe maaf kr de raavi please meri glti h me teri saari baate manta hu please tu mujhe maaf kr de me vada krta hu tujhe vo pyar vo respect dunga jo tu deserve krti h please raavi get khol de
Raavi get kholti h
Shiva :- raavi (hugged her) mujhe maaf kr de raavi please
Raavi :- (breaking the hug ) shiva me tujhse gussa nhi hu pr ab hum kbhi sath nhi ho skte humari duniya alag h tere lie teri family sb kuch h or me tujhe unhe chodne k lie nhi kh skti or na me chahti hu tu unhe chode pr jesi life me chahti hu jo pyar jo respect me deserve krti hu mujhe is ghar se mili h or ab raaste alag h to inhe alag hi rhne dete h tere aane se phle me or meri family bohat khush the apni duniya me jha koi meri beti k janm pr sawal nhi uthata tha jha meri respect thi jha koi mere character pr sawal nhi uthata tha shiva(holding his hands) please sb khatam krte h me K or chini k sath yha se chali jaege humesha k lie tu bhul jana hum vapas mile the qki me ese nhi rh skti or sayad humara sath hina kismat me hi nhi tha
(saying this raavi gave a forehaed kiss to shiva and get back to home and closed the door
Shiva was standing stil like his whole life sattered after some time dev came their as kinjal called rishita to take back shiva as it is very cold outside and due to raavi's firm decision they also cant take him into house at that time shiva is sitting on stairs and dev also came and sit beside him )
Dev :- shiva ghar chal dekh bohat raat ho rhi h teri tbyt kharab ho jaegi hum raavi se kl baat krege chal
Shiva :- dev raavi ne mujhse apne sare rishte tod die h vo sb kuch chod kr yha se jane ki baat kr rhi h me ky kru dev me har gya me apne pyar ko har gya dev me har gya
(just then kinjal open the door she also came and sit another side beside shiva)
Kinjal :- sirf tera pyar nhi hara h shiva aaj raavi ka pyar bhi har gya or sach khu to vo khud har gai h tujhse dur jakr raavi kbhi khush nhi rh skti pr tere sath rhkr vo chini ko esi life nhi dena chahti jisse use kbhi koi glt bol ske raavi ne bachpan se bohat tane sune h shiva or vo nhi chahti ki chini kbhi vo tane sune me humesha se raavi ki khushi chahti hu shiva or sach khu to mujhe lgta tha uski khushi tere sath h pr jo aaj hua uske baad raavi ki life me sayad khushi na ho pr tumhare sath rh kr use respect bhi nhi milegi to behtar hoga ki tum raavi ko bhul jao raavi jha jaegi vo khush rahegi or iska vada me krti hu me kbhi raavi ko chod kr nhi jaungi pr tumhe usse dur jana hga shiva uske lie khud k lie chini k lie please shiva me tumhare aage hath jodti hu(joining hands) me apni family phle hi kho chuki hu ab agar raavi ya chini ko kuch hua to me mar jaungi humari dosti ka tohfa mang hi hu please raavi se dur rho
(Saying this kinjal leaves and after some time shiva and dev also went home)
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so guys ye part yhi khatam hota h i know chota h but i tried as me thoda problem face kr rhi hu currently writing me as mere thoughts shattle ho rhe h i think this is my best shot me is condition me jesa likh sakti thi i tried i hope you liked it and please comment aap is story se aage ky chahte h
ky shiva ko giveup ke dega
ky raavi yha se chali jaegi
aapko ky lgta h aage ky hoga please comment kijie
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Your Sweet Writer
Shruti
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FanficSo story is gonna continue from current track where at dandia / krish engagement shiva clearly said he is not gonna do anything ab jo krna h raavi kregi to ab aage raavi ky kregi vo shiva ko mnaegi ya kuch or.
