🍑Teen Fiction/YA Results🍑

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Teen Fiction/YA

Special thanks to our judges jeveuxuneaspirine and inkysparrow!!


3rd Place

What's wrong with my fan? by ViniShah2

What's Wrong With My Fan: 

Cover (10/10)

-relevance: 5/5

-design: 5/5

 Blurb (9/10)

 -relevance: 5/5 - Awesome Blurb 

- interest: 4/5

 Plot Development (13/15) 

 - pace: 5/5

 - information: 5/5

 - interest: 3/5 - I don't read very much fan fiction, because I usually don't follow the fandoms. 

 Technical Ability 15/15) 

 - grammar: 4/5

- language: 5/5

 - formatting: 5/5 - Formatting was unique, so standard rules didn't apply. 

 Characters (15/15) - loved the characters so far 

 - likeability: 5/5

 - relationships: 5/5

 - development: 5/5

 Overall Enjoyment (8/10) 

 I loved the cover of the book. It really worked well with this teen story. The concept of the plot was cute and reminded me a little of the Otome game "Mystic Messenger". There was some slight grammar issues, but nothing major. In chapter two, a book title was not underlined, so it took me a bit to understand the sentence until I figured out that they were talking about a book. Overall, it was a cute read. I liked Borastrawberry's personality. He sounds like the cutsey, cake-eating, carry-me, sort of anime love interest. I usually don't read fan-fiction type stories, but I am going to keep this on my reading list. 

 Total score: 70/75                                                                                                                                                                


Second Place

The Best Friend Equation by thunderbird999

The Best Friend Equation by thunderbird999

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