Challenge: write a poem using repetition and be sure to include at least one use of contrasting words.
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Orbs of many colors
Scales ever-swapping
Never gone.
Musical and freeing.
Hard and sturdy.
Flapping and floating.
Notes of hurting
Or of joy to the world
Orbs of yellow seek
Our fire in question
Distasteful of all
Abandoned and cold
Free to the world.
Free to see.
Free to point at and laugh.
Free to discourage or degrade.
Free to hurt smaller yellow orbs.
Free to make a mockery of
Their
Importance to me.
Orbs of red, mine
The world all burns
In glorious destruction
The blazing beauty
Harms all but me
I have tough scales
Both sing their pride
Orbs of blood
As ashes rise up
Yin and Yang
Above the rest
Victorious roars rise over mountains high
Fall back down
Protected orbs of dandelion
Singular
All scales abandoned at birth.
Shielded again
Personal strength in numbers
Orbs of poppy used right
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Overall thoughts? Good or Bad?
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Dimensional Kaleidoscope
PoetryEach poem is one of the gems I see through my author's kaleidoscope. I write stories from the perspectives of all the characters I can see from across the universe. Enjoy. (picture not mine)
