Shower (Lune poem)

12 5 5
                                        

I wanna shower

But my heart is cold

Winter, be kind!





*Written for January 10 Days Poetry Camp by undoubtedlymine

#Day6

**(The lune) is also known as the (American Haiku). It was first created by the poet (Robert Kelly) and was a result of Kelly's frustration with English haiku. After much experimentation, he settled on a (13-syllable), self-contained poem that has 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the second line and 5 syllable in the final line.

There is a variant lune created by poet (Jack Collom). and has the structure of 3 words in the first line, 5 words in the second line and 3 words in the final line.

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