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Jaylan Carter | dallas,

6:23 pm

The baby shower was going smooth , everyone that was there was happy to see the baby mothers with all the accessories that we're surrounding us

" Our next game is going to be guess how big the belly is" ajinay spoke into the microphone as she was hosting the games that everyone played

" keyshawn , jaylon help me wrap the ladies and everyone get a number in your head " she spoke and i nodded

Taking the take measure going around the belly of brooklyns to measure the size

" dang you big " i teased her as she got teary eyed , " no i'm sorry stop stop " i spoke kissing her showing her the measures

" ajinay here it's that number " i showed her 190 on the measure for everyone to guess

" mawmaw what's your guess ? " she asked as mawmaw was standing up which is brooklyn and ajinay's grandmother

" it's 204 " she spoke with confidence as brooklyn laughed at the fact she was loud and wrong

" ms . marissa " she spoke towards my mother who guessed right on the spot

" it's 190 , duh 190 " she spoke getting uo going to get the gift of her choosing

" dang how she knew " brooklyn asked me i could only return a shrug

" what you get ma " i spoke towards her as she pulled out the racks on money that was in a bag , it was one of my gifts that i made and didn't know what to buy there was over five thousand dollars in that bag

" my moneyyy " she spoke while dancing pointing at everyone

" maggie your turn " ajinay spoke while waiting for keyshawn to finish and get the measurements

" um there u are sis " keyshawn spoke while showing an measurement of 226

" jasmine go , asia go , mawmaw go , k2 go , and monaé go" ajinay shouted while everyone yelled out an number

" 189 " jasmine spoke

" wrong " keyshawn yelled causing everyone to laugh

"200 " asia spoke while pointing

" just loud and wrong " brooklyn shouted as she shook her head

" mawmaw " i spoke trying to get her to go

" ion wanna play nomo , yall cheating " she said as she got up going towards the food section making everyone laugh

" k2 " i spoke seeing that he'd be zoned off

" my young nigga like 219 max " he spoke as he was looking around at her to eye ball things

" monaé" we spoke not wanting to conform him

" she 207" she shrugged as everyone shook their head

" k2 come get the gift , she's 226 and he was the closest " ajinay spoke while placing the gifts out

" i got fucling body work , champagne toast at that " he shook his head

Everyone was having a great time but i was honestly ready to leave , i didn't like all these people being around for no reason at all and me and brook had an doctors appointment in the mornin

" let me kno when you ready , we gon leave " i spoke into brooklyn's ear while kissing her cheek

" mm okay baby , we can leave in a minute " she spoke back towards me

" go towards the food and fix us food " she spoke while pointing at it , " you know what i like " she smiled

" mkay " i spoke going to fix the food as she wanted

" aye keyshawn , if y'all don't leave wid us don't let shot happen to yourself " i said as he was at the food section also getting things to take home

" i got chu , stay up " he spoke but he held an longer eye contact standing with me before it was broken by maggie

" hey baby , you look nice jaylon punk " she spoke as she started kissing keyshawn

Suching on my teeth as i could have gotten a better feeling of what was going on between me and keyshawn i just left and went back to sit with brooklyn who was talking to my mom

" yeah girl you see the ring " she spoke as she was showing the ring i got her for the engagement , while my mother only adored it

My mother was married but my dad died a while back and that's what made me the way i am now , ruthless and can get out of hand sometimes

" ma we finna go " i spoke not wanting her to know that much about anything , she always would go and start about his father and the at never set right with him

" u want me to lock this place up ?" she asked me as she looked at he trying to stare into my soul with the stare , she knew i was uncomfortable within the situation

" yeah , preciate it " i spoke walking out with brooklyn right behind me , she was looking down plus i could tell she was tired , " wait here w them and tell everyone your goodbyes " i spoke with a semi smile on my face not wanting to let her know i felt something was finna happen

Going out the start the car for her there was someone waiting outside for me , ready to gun me down in any given moment , 4 gunshots went off and making everybody in the venue scream and get down accept brooklyn

She was running outside to see a bleeding out jaylon laying across the street of the venue making her pit his head up against her lap and cry out for help , " KEYSHAWN , MAGGIE " she could yell so much as she was crying trying to talk to him as he choked on his blood while she was calling for an ambulance

" yes my husband, has been shot several time ; 5 shots .. 2 to the upper body and 3 to the lower " i spoke as the lady told me they were on their way

" ma ma-make sure our babygirl , is happy ok ?" i spoke slowly trying not to loose anymore blood as he was slowly loosing it , " stay with me , you can't leave me " she cried out even more as keyshawn was putting pressure on the most important parts of the body that had been shot

not understanding as much why me but i thought back towards amiri ; it was his brother finally getting get back

" amiri b-" i spoke out towards keyshawn as he only nodded knowing what i was saying as the ambulance only told me i couldn't speak anymore

That night may have been one of the most scariest nights ever far from the fact that he would be leaving brooklyn and maybe even his baby girl

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