Sorry guys for editing this book so much! I've just been working really hard on this for a while even though it's not even close to being finished. I want it to be really good and I'm pretty picky about the way my books are. I also have a question for you guys. I want to know if you like the sentences spread out more like the first two chapters, or closer together like the others. I'll put examples down below. I honestly prefer the split up version, but I want to know your opinion
Split up
Today is going to be a great day, I thought to myself. That was until I opened my door to find Gandalf the gray staring down at me. He looked as if he was about to knock, but I had opened the door before he could.
"Gandalf, what a surprise, what on Middle Earth are you doing here?" He hands me a rolled-up piece of parchment.
"I'm going on an adventure, and I think your magic will come in handy." (Well, I haven't been on an adventure in a while, so what the heck I'll go with him.) "Of course, I would love to accompany you on this journey.
I need the experience anyway, but where are we going exactly?" I already started signing the parchment and gave it back to Gandalf. "Here come inside and you can tell me all about it while I pack."
Closer Together
Today is going to be a great day, I thought to myself. That was until I opened my door to find Gandalf the gray staring down at me. He looked as if he was about to knock, but I had opened the door before he could. "Gandalf, what a surprise, what on Middle Earth are you doing here?" He hands me a rolled-up piece of parchment.
"I'm going on an adventure, and I think your magic will come in handy." (Well, I haven't been on an adventure in a while, so what the heck I'll go with him.) "Of course, I would love to accompany you on this journey. I need the experience anyway, but where are we going exactly?" I already started signing the parchment and gave it back to Gandalf. "Here come inside and you can tell me all about it while I pack."
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The Dragon Witch: A Hobbit x Reader
Fantasy!!SLOW UPDATES!! There once was a fair elf maiden who dreamed of settling down with a family far away. She wanted to leave her home of Mirkwood. So she does, she leaves her elven friends and family behind. She settles in a small town in Harlindon ne...
