The beginning

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We have been on this ship for a few days and I've noticed a change in Eric he seems to be  a lot happier. He's now dancing and singing with the crew.

Dark clouds caressed the sky.

"SEA STORM" A crew member shouted
"AL HANDS ON DECK!" said another

Ariel rushed over Eric bringing him inside

Giant waves over came them the sky wasn't to be seen.

Eric grabbed onto to Ariel as the waves rocked the boat.

A big wave hit the boat making them fall over. Ariel's  necklace broke. Her tail came out.

An even bigger wave hit the boat locking it over. Water started to fill into the cabin. Leaving a small airpocket

Ariel grabbed onto Eric and pulled hit out of the boat everyone got onto the lifeboats leaving Ariel behind.

Eric tried getting her but it was to late.




This was very short but I enjoyed making it.

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