Since The Knife In My Hand is part of my mafia book writing experience. I need to understand what I need to inpove on.
My reasoning for the different versions of my mafia princess story is that you need to play around with words and plot lines. Basically, experiment with things to understand what you are doing, how you are doing it and what can you do to make it better.
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The Knife In My Hand
RomanceThe girl who goes by different names and has two sides: her angel and her devil. Elma has lived enough to know that there is no backing out of the world she is in. It's life or death on the battlefield of destruction. Being a Bianchi what does that...
