Part -63 |Rival|

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Holaaaa guysss How are you all ??? Doing great ???

You must be doing great just by sneakily reading the update and leaving without any comments and nothing



Many of the readers just come read and go away not even voting the update.....just check upon the last update comments guys not even 50 ???? Seriouslyyyyyy ??????



Are you guys fedup and got bored that  not even 50 comments worth for my update ???? I am totally dissapointed by the response on last update ......2500+ people read the update but only 35 comments I got in return of my sparing time to you people 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂



Just wowwww .......sooo elegant soo beautiful you guys are 🙂🙂🙂🙂




Chupke chupke update padlo maze loo aur nikalo naa koi vote karega naa koi comment karega nothing.....I am feeling like khud ke liye story likh rahi hu 🙂🙂🙂🙂




I even saw some hateful comments on other authors story plots because of their late update of the story ......but what you people are doing ???? You don't even have 10 seconds of time to update and expecting the authors to write the update which easily takes 3 straight hours for writing and editing to publish one single update !!!!! Do you guys even know ???
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Peeping into the plot.......



A week back shalini flyback to her country after helping sidharth in necessary work for company



It's a simple sunday in Shukla's mansion


Morning 10Am



Sidharth is sleeping soundly on bed where jannat is also sleeping beside him with scrunched nose because her papa arm which is wrapped around her petite little body is  feeling heavy on her .......shehnaaz who came into the room for the nth time to wake them up just huff by seeing the dad nd daughter duo





She came and sit on the bed glaring them .....Both are looking like the carbon copy , sleeping with open mouth, messy hair , with wide open legs .....on the king size bed where 5 people can easily fit these two are struggling more to get enough space




Sidharthhhhh......abhi ke abhi aap nahi uthoge toh dheklenaaa .......




She again yell to which he just frown his eyebrows and pull jannat more into him who just winced in sleep with annoyed face




Ahhhh  papaaa......chodooo.......Aapka haath bohot bhaari hai .....I will become colgate paste , pls move your hand ....she yell cutely in her sleepy voice



Ohh....ok ...he whisper in sleepy husky tone and just loosen his grip but still holding her protectively




Shehnaaz chuckle to her complaint and scold jannat too ......





'Enough of sleeping , Wakeup jannat you have to eat breakfast '





No response, both are sleeping like pigs making her more frustrate






If you are not going to wakeup in 2 minutes , Dono ko guest room me sone dungi mai ek hafta ke liye .....No entry into this room .....






Thats it.....Sidharth wokeup like he got a shock of current where jannat just lazily sit upon bed still with closed eyes





mummaa.......Today is sunday , why you are giving punishments ....she pout angrily rubbing her eyes cutely





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