Opinion: The chapters, i think, are too repetitive. They're about the same thing; they wanna fuck each other, it's too tempting, they end up doing stuff only to get interrupted every time 🙄 it's really annoying tbh but also entertaining lol. The tension between these two characters is amazing, but nothing ever really happens. Then suddenly, there's this huge time jump, and after the time jump, the rest of the story sort of goes like that, it goes back and forth. The epilogue was such a weird way to end the story, it doesn't really fit as an ending to this story, it would've made sense during the last few chapters, but not as an epilogue. The last chapter makes a better epilogue than the epilogue itself. Overall, the story is quite good, just has a few mishaps.
Trope: Strangers to enemies to lovers
Warning: There's very few smut, i think there's only one chapter that's, like, a full sex "scene." The rest are just bits and pieces, it's not a full description (if that makes sense).
Rating: 7 out of 10
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