hi hiii! these are the collection of poems I wrote and abandoned when I was 13. six years after, I'm revisiting it and I'm still clueless on how to improve. I'm not an English speaker and I would really appreciate criticism on how to better my poems...
I Used to Think That Love Is Farcical, But when my world is challenged by it, I can't stop smiling like a fool, My face seems to lit, My body seems to warm like a wool, I'm bewitched by her, her body and her enchanting mien. I want to be with her for eternity.
And so, I moan to her every night; ''I Loved You as The Flower You Were and Your Petals, But Now – I Love You for Your Roots''.
Then Every Time She Tries to Deny Because Of Her Own Inexperience with Love, I Sung to Her- My Fluttery Notes That Mimic My Beating Heart; “You Don’t Need to Learn About Love, Everything About You, Is Love.
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