Verse 1-
The first thing you said to me that morning,
"That make up ruins your face,"
I felt my smile fade
I value your opinion above all elseThe silly comments that you make
Are still enough to break my day
But you don't even notice I'm not doing wellChorus 1-
And if I talked to you like you talked to me, would you still be here?
And if I talked to him while I talked to you
like you did with me, while you talked with her
Then would you still be here?
And if you were out of my life, would it make me happy
And if I was out of yours, would you care
but I still want you to be hereVerse 2-
did you know I think about it everyday?
And do you regret anything you say?
Would you look back on this in ten years time and apologize?
for all the times
you used my insecurities against me
And made me think of my worth late at night while I cried Myself to sleep.Chorus 2-
And if I talked to you like you talk to me
Would you still be here?
And if I had the choice to break free from you
Would I deserve to
And if you were out of my life, would it make me happy
And if I was out of yours, would you careBridge-
what's the point of putting all my effort into helping other people
when people put no effort into helping meThe only person I can fix is myself
And it'll feel good when I say "go to hell"
Go to hell.Chorus 3-
Cause,
If I talked to you like you talked to me, would you still be here
And if you were out of my life, would it make me happy
And if I was out of yours, would you care
And if you come to me with you apologies
Would I still be here...
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Mixed Emotions
PoetryI am an aspiring song artist/writer, so I've written a couple (a lot) songs, and I need feedback and criticism. be as harsh as you want but keep in mind I'm only 14 years old.😬 I have no music, because I don't know how to do it... so basically it'...