'Click' main door opened revealing a young man probably living in his 20's he entered and sat on the couch resting his head then suddenly someone entered making him flinch as he wasn't expecting that there would be someone waiting for him
???:- Oh! Mr Kim Taehyung thought of returning home (sarcastically)
Taehyung:- Jin Hyung I got a lot of work
Jimin:- oh really you indeed got alot of work as an intern doctor
Taehyung:- hyung you are taking it wrong
Suga:- Taehyung if again I will see you overworking then no one will be worst than me you come late at night just see the time it's 1 am
Taehyung:- sorry hyung
Jin:- show me your schedule of today
Taehyung hands him the schedule
Jin:- under whom you work
Taehyung:- under Dr Wang
Jin:- ughh that Wang he thinks that the doctors are robots he always make his assigned intern doctors overwork
Suga:- hyung earlier under which Taehyung used to work was miss bae right
Jin:- yeah you are right but she resigned so I guess the intern doctors who used to work under her started working under Dr Wang but he is so cruel he make them overwork like 12 to 33 hours continuous
Suga:- then Hyung take tae under you
Jin:- hmm that is what I can do to stop him from overworking and making himself sick and I will also fire that Wang
Suddenly they here a crying sound from jungkook's room they immediately tan to the room and unlocked it
Jin:- hobi Joon what happened why he again started crying
Namjoon:- hyung his head is badly paining
Jimin:- ( runs to him and hugged him) my bunny stop crying you will make yourself sick
Jungkook - hyung it's paining badly please take it away
Jin:- bunny it's fine it's okay ( touched his forehead to slide the bangs covering his forehead but found it burning) kook how you got this much high fever hobi bring a thermometer Namjoon bring a bowl with cold water yoongi make soup for him Taehyung prepare fever reducers shot fast (everyone got to the work assigned to them )
Taehyung:- (comes with a injection in his hands ) hyung should I give him
Jin:- no wait yoongi has not brought soup till now
Suga:- (came hurriedly) hyung take it it's not too hot it's enough for him to drink
Jin:- (took the bowl from him) hmm it's temprature is good
Hoseok:- hyung take this thermometer
Jin:- kook open your mouth so that i can measure your temperature
Jungkook did everything including finding his temperature fully finishing his soup eating medicines and right now he completed his shots
Taehyung:- done
Jin:- he cried too much he got soo much high fever he got whole red with high fever
Jimin:- yeah hyung
Hoseok:- hyung you stay with him
Jin:- okay you and I will stay with him
Jimin:- hyung i am feeling bad we just ignored him for one week and he got this much sick he had his whole face red with high fever
They were taking how much it would have affected to jungkook but didn't see that there is one more person whose whole face was also red his breath was warm he had bloodshot red eyes he was looking like lifeless body it was none other than Taehyung yes his brothers loved him but they ignored him why? because they were so possessive over jungkook and too engrossed in there work to spare a glance to him they noticed that he has been overworking for few days but it's wrong he had been overworking for a month now but they noticed this now
Jin:- okay now all of in your rooms now and good night
Everyone:- okay hyung good night (goes to there own room)
In Taehyung's room-------------------------_----------------
Taehyung was sitting on his bed staring at the moon as his bed is closer to the window
Taehyung:- eomma you told me if there is any problem then I should tell that to my hyungs but I guess I can't they love me over jungkook they just ignore me am I invisible to them or they just hate me huh tell me why you left me here you should have taken me also am I not worthy enough to get loved ( started crying hardly)
He was just crying and crying then slep unknowingly as he had fever
How many nights had he lain here, pillow damp, eyes swollen? How many whispered pleas had he sent into the void, hoping for a miracle? His brothers’ laughter, distant yet piercing, echoed in his mind—a reminder of his invisibility. Yet somewhere, deep within, a seed of resilience sprouted. He vowed to rewrite his story—to become more than the ignored star. For even in pain, there was strength.
His pillows cradled the weight of his tears, absorbing the saltwater ache that had become his nightly companion. The room, with its creaking floorboards and whispered secrets, held his unanswered questions—the echoes of longing that bounced off its walls, seeking solace in the darkness. Only the room knew—the silent witness to a symphony of pain, where the his heart played its haunting melody.Did he asked too much?
Wasn't he worthy for any love?
Is he invisible?
Those were his unanswered questions
In shadows’ embrace, he lies—
A vessel of unspoken dreams,
Pillows cradling saltwater ache,
Walls absorbing unanswered screams.Why am I invisible? he whispers,
Frayed voice lost in moon’s silver glow.
His heart, once buoyant, now an anchor,
Yearns for warmth, for touch, for more.Outside, laughter dances—a cruel symphony,
While he remains the forgotten star.
And so, he weeps—an ocean of unshed words,
Love unclaimed, a melody that scars.Sleep envelops him, fragile cocoon,
Dreams whispering promises of seen eyes.
Morning will come, but within these walls,
He clings to darkness, where silence lies._____________________________________________
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Am I Invisible ?
Fanfictionone brother who is unintentionally ignored by his five elder brothers also hiding his past behind his beautiful smile. Will his brothers know it ? will his brothers get to know the damage they have made ? just dive in