is this better...or worse?

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Chapter For StarPaws decids
flamrs ur all satanits!11 anyon who dosent like the stro is a staneist cause StarGIPaw has such a strng conecton with sTarcaln and thats why you dot like it, its cause u do ntlik JEZUS!

"StarPaw wok up its tim 4 parole." (In real stories, you say 'for' not 4)

StarPaw opnd hr brite reinbow eys and locked arund.(bright rainbow eyes... Seems legit)

"Omigosh who wus tha!1!1"Sshe yellow.(she's yellow now?)

"Its me GrayStipe" GrayStrip wisperd in her er. StarPaw gottedup.(graystripe whatcha doing)

"Omigosh Graystip what do u want!1 she yelped GrayStrpe locked at hr. "Wll u be my mat" hE ESked.("of course I will be your mat, now you can walk all over me")

"OMigosh grayStripe thats so nic!" StarKit scremed. "but FireStar alredy esked me."(so basically everyone can hear this)

"wel then hes jst an idot."(idiot?)

"StarPaw wok up its tim 4 parole."(what?)

StarPaw opnd hr brite reinbow eys and locked arund.

"Omigosh who wus tha!1!1"Sshe yellow.
(Didn't we just go through this crap?)

"Its me GrayStipe" GrayStrip wisperd in her er. StarPaw gottedup.

"Omigosh Graystip what do u want!1 she yelped GrayStrpe locked at hr. "Wll u be my mat" hE ESked.(oh god...)

"OMigosh grayStripe thats so nic!" StarKit scremed. "but FireStar alredy esked me."

"wel then hes jst an idot."

(Okay back on track...I guess)
y do u say tha?" yellED STARPaw GayStrip locked at hr meanly. "i dont lik him" sqeakd GrayStripe (last I checked they were best friends) he locked arund fastly. "hes a mean cat!

"OMIGOSH U MEAN LIKE SCOURG?" STARPAW SHOCKED.(what)

"No ur much prtter then sourg" said(prettier then scourge?) Graystripe he licked her on the head I want u to be my mat." he yeleled.(so everyone can hear this)

"Well mabey. but what would FireStar say?" she wispereed. GrayStripe locked around agan. "I dont think he wuld mind." said GraStri;e (that name game)

"OMIGOSH SUR THAN!" StarPaww yelleded happly. (Wtf)

"Wat ar uo ta;kin abut" said FireHert he was walkin up. He locked angrily. (What's with cats be locked?)

"oh uhhhh nuthin FireStar go back to sleep!" mwled StarPaw hoppin he would leaf so she culd be alon with grayStripe. (Pretty much makes Starpaw a slut)

"Yah FireStra theres nithing to wory about!" cherrid GrayStrpe but Firestar didn't leave insted he said i thought I herd you asking her to be our mate."
(Lol)

"oh uh yeh. yELLED STARPaw but he didn;t leaf instead he jumped on GrayStripe!1!11(so he's not a leaf )

"I Want to be wit her!" said FireHart attakin GraySriep. (Lel)

"No I do!" shouted. (Shouted who?)

"guysys stop fihting you can BOTH be my mats! StarPaw wispered apply like seCert." (What the... What is wrong with her?)

"No we can;t do that their can only be 1!11 Howled Firestar. "Otterwies youll chet on us."(yup, at least someone has a brain-ish)

"So StarGleam, who will u pik?" giggled (GAYSTRIPE... lol) GayStipe.(stargleam... LOL WUT?)

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