Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1
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wow, modesty. what a braggart
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StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.
"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.
"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked.
"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.
But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11
"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of.
"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good filter!"
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Thank you! I specialise in pools. I get all the dirt out!
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StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant.
thnkx and ples no more flams
Chapter Three The Traning Under The Star
OMGOSH GUkys im so sorry but SOMEONE glares at rainy days FLAMED ME AND I GOT REALLY HURT. OKKAY IF you dont LIKE thestor y you dont have to readit u know.
Chapter Three The Traning Under The Stars
Shadowclan run from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now .
StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!"
"Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?" "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new."
"Ok." They went to the frost togather and the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog."
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I thought this story was about cats?!? LOL
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"Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was ready for anything!
"ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit.
"Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at FireStar not Giving hiM time to attakc. "She hit his side he didn't move he was to surprise.d she clawed him and he started bledding. "wow StarPaw" he said ".Your doing awesome." "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was doing that god was she relly special like the porphesy meowed?
"Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.,"
"OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys and her fur.
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la la la love!
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"Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was alittle tired.
"Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry."
"Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_.
Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan.
Locking upn at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there."
"Ya totally." Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!"
"Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!)
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woah, sickos? great way to get fans! :/
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they were best friends. She loked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head.
REVIEW R MY LIFE
(lol u like it Jazzy I mead you as kawai as I could(
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Wouldn't it be weird if the real jazzy was a girl. XD
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