Chapter 1

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This is my first story ever. I am anxious to see what people think. I am always open to advice, or if you notice a mistake please let me know. I need comments so I know where I did good and where I need work. I am not really good at making covers or anything so I am sorry about that. Please no mean comments i understand if you don't like my story but please just move on to the next one if it is not for you. To me this is all about getting editing tips and just help with my story. I would love to know if you like my story. If you like it please vote. Please Please Please. Also just a warning my story does have graphic sex scenes. If that isn't your thing you might not want to read. Thank you so much for reading. 

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Loneliness is a disease that can infect your soul, it spreads to every party of your life until there is nothing but darkness. You might think there is no escape, that no matter what you do to escape it ,it will always pull you back. I am proof that there is an escape.

I could feel the sun beating down on my face, it felt good to sit quietly for a few moments enjoying the warmth from the sun after the cold of winter. Finally, the sun had come out and summer is finally here. I could hear the city life around me, the chaos of Detroit going on around me. As many bad things you hear about this city, there are just as many good things. The city life here was wonderful, the museums, and markets and the beauty of the city was amazing. Someday people would see the beauty of this city that I loved so much.

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