Name: Ravenpaw at death
-but isn't that..like..a real cat name and..other stuff like that? Wow. Okay..-
Age: 10 moons at death
Gender: tom
(Original.)
Looks: a black tom with messy black fur and dark brown eyes
-his looks look okay-
Fandom: warriors
-yup, it's ravenpaw-
Rank: apprentice at death
-so it's not ravenpaw because he dosent die, I'm pretty sure. Yeah he dosent die. So this might not be the actual Ravenpaw!-
Other: he was killed by a badger, had a crush on this cat named Littlepaw, and was mentally slow
-I like the finishing touches!-
Dark forest, place of no stars, or star clan: star clan
-I can see that! He seems like a nice cat.-
Mary sureness: 10%
Most people have there ocs still living, especially in a badger attack. But Ravenpaw actually died! (Wow that's sad) my only off is the cannon name, and Ravenpaw also escaping, and I don't know the clan so if it was in thunderclan.. anyways, good job at Galaxy's Mary sureness tester!
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