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Azura's Demise Runaway Scene

This is for Queazy 's use only, this is for her making my cover for my book Azura's Demise. No one else is allowed to use it no matter what. Please if you see someone else who might have copied me, please tell me because it would help a lot. Also it would be for your own good to not copy someone else for then you can practice writing properly on your own. Now on with the Sneak Peek for: Azura's Demise

Option 1:

Azura peeked over the rock she was hidden behind, making sure none of the guards were paying attention. She held her breath in excitement and anticipation, afraid to even make the slightest of movements. Getting courage from how close she was to leaving the sea, she slowly crept out from behind the rock and-

"Hey! Look, that SeaWing is trying to get away! Quick, get her!" a guard shouted using Aquatic. Azura cursed under her breathe before spreading her wings and shooting up in the water. Faster, Faster, FASTER! She chanted repeatedly in her head. Just as she was about to break to the water surface, she felt herself being dragged down. No! she thought. She flailed around desperately trying to knock the guard off of her. Her talons clawed at the water, trying to reach for the surface. She watched as the sun rays get farther and farther away as her dreams of leaving the sea and visiting a world not full of water slowly start to vanish with the light.

"Hey! Get your dirty claws off my friend!" she heard a familiar voice call. Her spirits lifted as she saw Shore barreling towards her. The guard taken by surprise was knocked back, and Azura was released. "Don't just stay there staring, let's go!" Immediately Azura came back to her senses and soon the pair shot off as fast as they could and burst out of the water into the light of the rising sun. Shore's aquamarine scales glittered in the sunlight, their breathes coming out in short pants. "Don't ever try to leave me again OK? We can always do this together like we used too." Azura nodded gratefully towards her best friend and hugged her briefly. She looked out into the distance, both dragons looking at their surroundings in wonder.

"We're free Shore, we're finally free. We can finally create our own story and go on our won adventure." and with that, the two friends went, soaring in the sky and off into the sunrise without ever looking back.

Okay so, if you don't like that I can show you the option 2 for you if you're not satisfied with this. If you have any suggestions on how I can improve my writing or this specific part, then please say so in the comments below! It'd be a great help for me to write better and more interesting stories :) Anyways, I hope you guys enjoyed that preview of my upcoming book. I look forward to publishing Azura's Demise and seeing how everything turns out ;) Well see you guys later! Baiiiii

~Cabbage~ ^~^